SO Briar murdered his mother can't say I blame him. Mistaking Cyr for an ordinary pimp and recalling his mother as his last pimp sad. How do you so easily paint the pictures in my head, I envisioned the mansion like it was s black and white movie and then all of a sudden poof it became violet with your words. I wish I could tell Briar to run and screw his friends but I'm positive this Cyr will do anything to get what he wants and at this moment he seems very much to want Briar. This next part should be interesting maybe get a few answers to the questions that are swirling in my head.
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