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Chap 6
Thank you for the fast update !
It's cruel to show him such delicate and beautiful flowers... In the hell house !
Briar needs to be more careful with Celeste. I'm afraid of the worst !

Your updates are so frustrating and amazing at the same time; they give little by little more detail to the story, but at the same time they are so short! And I'm waiting and waiting and waiting and still, my curiosity is being delayed once again. And I'm hoping for some action soon!

It seems Briar has made two friends. I like that. I hate that his life has been violated starting with what his mother did. He is a very interesting young man.
Linda

Just read 1-7 and I Love it so much! Thank you so much for the great fic! I am waiting like mad crazy for more!! Drink one for me, I have to go to the dreaded place they keep my paycheck! BLAHH. I will check the very second I get home for more! YAY great story. I think I found my other favorite writer!!

You crack me up! I am the same way as you, this is all I have to do now besides dealing with my family who knows to pretty much leave me alone when I am writing, or they usually do!! Loved this chapter again...hmmm there is a pattern here? lol I really hate that damn cage! Okay, so I guess I'm sick like Briar becasue I'M really attracted to Cyr too! Damn if he would just stop being such a damn PRICK! Great chapter sweetie, and sitting here writing while casually peeking back online to see if you post another one today! MUCH love to ya!!!!!!

Chap 7
Another strong chapter !
Cyr gave me the creeps !! Really !
And I think he knows more about Briar than he tells...
Poor boy is going to break !

CHAPTER 7
I love reading your words as you peel back the layers of Briar and especially Cry. Briar we can all sympathize with but it’s so hard to get a grasp on Cyr and his deviant behavior, so I guess what we learn in this chapter is that it’s not just “Him” that has an obsession with Briar and Cyr is a one small step above a pedo. Which is disgusting but then why are we so drawn to him? Sleeping with Briar’s clothes up the ante on creepiness. How has Briar survived this far, between his mother, the streets and not Cyr? Good for Briar throwing the jab at Cyr: “Turn you on you sick fuck?”. I can’t imagine the struggle going inside him being attracted and sickened by Cyr, he must feel like his own mind and body are traitor to his soul. Good glory the degradation Briar felt as he was forced to perform oral sex then jerked off on then the final sin having to eat Cyr spilt semen off himself. (I say all that but I also got a little hot and bothered-WHY?!). I don’t even know what to say about Briar’s newest punishment except death by icy water would probably be the kindest gentlest death he would receive at Cyr’s hands.
As for you’re an I hope Anborn is not too tired to spin some more tales. XOXO

I hope Briar will make it out okay! Love the fast updates.

this is so dark. and i dont see much lovey doveyness in the future for briar. but it is compelling. i cant wait to see how much worse "He" is. and yeah, i can not wait for the Henri/briar scene... there will be one... wont there? *hopeful eyes*
thanks for the update.
and i actually enjoyed this chapter the most so far... it had some nice insights into briar's personality... and the way it ended... i feel so weepy now. but in a good way.

Each chapter is enlightning in its own right; I quite like your story. And definitely can't wait to meet Himself :D