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January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I had a lot of catching up to do! I have been sick for awhile so I was really glad to be able to get on here and catch up on what I had missed. I am really into this story! The connection that him and Celeste. It has me wondering if they will sneak and get together or not. Cyr is very interesting! The way he is Briar and how he almost killed him...wow. You don't give yourself enough credit, Camp! I really love how this story is coming along. I can't wait to read more!!
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January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Man you got me laughing with the question of Cyr being "strictly dickly" but then crying a little at the end of the chapter for Briar(I am such a softie lol). Thank you for writing yet another great chapter :).
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January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i am being wrapped up in this story. it is getting even better. more more more!!! i love love love it!!!! thank you so much!! my poor baby briar!! i just want everything to be okay for him... (and yet i also love to read how much worse it is getting for him).
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January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
very awesome story you've got going. i like all the weirdness
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January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 8
Seriously how Cyr can say something so seemingly soothing while being a complete pyscho? Also this “Him” we are hearing about sometimes I believe is Cyr but just a break in his psyche? But what do I know. Tempering all this violence and terror with breaks of humour is brilliant if this was just on slaughter after on slaughter I don’t know if we could take it, good for Briar to find something to laugh at even if it is a silly soap opera (which I have to say have been part of my life since I was a child, like most people my age when there was only on TV in the house). Also does Giraud now how gay he is? [Rhetorical question]. The end when Cyr shows up was the first time I felt nothing but desire for him, the way he called Briar “my pretty boy”, was chilling. I felt he really meant every word he owned Briar and desired his beauty and lusted that he was not yet a man. This chapter made me question Cyr motive; in my eyes let it escape that he cares for the boy maybe not a true healthy love but only as a fuck toy.
Desperately waiting for chapter 9… Read ya laters, XoXo
Seriously how Cyr can say something so seemingly soothing while being a complete pyscho? Also this “Him” we are hearing about sometimes I believe is Cyr but just a break in his psyche? But what do I know. Tempering all this violence and terror with breaks of humour is brilliant if this was just on slaughter after on slaughter I don’t know if we could take it, good for Briar to find something to laugh at even if it is a silly soap opera (which I have to say have been part of my life since I was a child, like most people my age when there was only on TV in the house). Also does Giraud now how gay he is? [Rhetorical question]. The end when Cyr shows up was the first time I felt nothing but desire for him, the way he called Briar “my pretty boy”, was chilling. I felt he really meant every word he owned Briar and desired his beauty and lusted that he was not yet a man. This chapter made me question Cyr motive; in my eyes let it escape that he cares for the boy maybe not a true healthy love but only as a fuck toy.
Desperately waiting for chapter 9… Read ya laters, XoXo
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January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness times four million! DAMN Cyr is hot! Hate him and want him just like Briar! That's me, sick in the head a little though. Great chapter and now sooo intrigued to know how Kelly knew him! Who else calls him Sire and so on. Wow another great one! Absolutely happy when I see your updates!! Nice nice job!
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January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Cyr can't be in love with Briar ?! Too soon, I think. If ever... ^^'
And if Cyr is a demon, then 'himself' is the devil, no ?
Thank you for your hard and fast work !! :)
And if Cyr is a demon, then 'himself' is the devil, no ?
Thank you for your hard and fast work !! :)
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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi Camp30 ! :))
I'm very curious about 'himself'. Can't wait to 'meet' him.
Briar is right. At fithteen he's still a child. Around the wrong people... T.T
I'm very curious about 'himself'. Can't wait to 'meet' him.
Briar is right. At fithteen he's still a child. Around the wrong people... T.T
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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 6
Neko's death didn't effect me until I read the story about how they met, I mean it sad because he was Briar's friend but this was a glimpse into their world and friendship. Oh and thank you for the answer on whether Briar has been with woman for more than just pay. The small pleasure's Briar enjoys that we take for granted (OJ & a cig). Is it wrong of me to want Briar to bag Celeste, not because of anything more than it would be his choice not forced upon in but I'm quite sure that would be the end of Celeste. IMHO Giraud is a classic self loather yet for some reason I feel no pity for him (but I know w/ your writing you can change my mind easily). Okay I may be a little in love w/ Henri: “There are many things that I won't be able to stop, but I will do what I can,” so honest but I didn't feel he said it flippantly it felt sincere and heartfelt. I purposely save this line for last because it was so profound and real: "my namesake was something that no one ever planted because it was a useless ugly plant that made people bleed when they got too close."
Thanks for another great chapter with such insight into the mind and world of this little lost boy that no one wanted.
Neko's death didn't effect me until I read the story about how they met, I mean it sad because he was Briar's friend but this was a glimpse into their world and friendship. Oh and thank you for the answer on whether Briar has been with woman for more than just pay. The small pleasure's Briar enjoys that we take for granted (OJ & a cig). Is it wrong of me to want Briar to bag Celeste, not because of anything more than it would be his choice not forced upon in but I'm quite sure that would be the end of Celeste. IMHO Giraud is a classic self loather yet for some reason I feel no pity for him (but I know w/ your writing you can change my mind easily). Okay I may be a little in love w/ Henri: “There are many things that I won't be able to stop, but I will do what I can,” so honest but I didn't feel he said it flippantly it felt sincere and heartfelt. I purposely save this line for last because it was so profound and real: "my namesake was something that no one ever planted because it was a useless ugly plant that made people bleed when they got too close."
Thanks for another great chapter with such insight into the mind and world of this little lost boy that no one wanted.
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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! You have me crying so early in the morning! Wow I wanna go to NO and break him outta there and hug him! Poor Briar!! OMG I love Henri but why do I sense there is another story there? Could Henri be himself? Probably not, that's how my sick mind works, lol! If not then good because then maybe Henri will fall for him and get him the hell out of there!! Loved the chapter, and stop worrying about the no sex chapters, they are just as good and improtant, I am enjoying every single word! Much Love!!!!!