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this is really great continue please and continue with a good plot

Great start so far. Looking forward to more

So is this your new one? Or is this another story that you had in mind? In any case, killer opening dude. Description of the location was pretty darn good and the plot is set and can go anywhere, which is always fun. Just one minor typo. " But renting the rooms would be a good idea, at least get my some company," cut a little, I'd like to believe that the my in that sentence was supposed to be a me.

Sorry if it seems like I'm being a little grammar-nazi ish. It's a habit.