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for Passion, Proof, Power

by ChibiShiva

schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yep, Sammi was riding Kevin the Cowboy, no need for horses. Firemen, cowboys, same thing. lol

It's nice that Kevin seemed like he actually cared about Sammi. He even stayed over. Even Shu-ei (forgot how it's spelled, sorry) seemed nice.

Sammi needs someone nice to get over that Darren bastard. But I'm not sure Ryan is the right one. He's a world-renowned producer and his new boss, so to speak. I still think Sammi should be professional with him and not come across as the man-whore he is. lol :)
person MagicMau5
schedule March 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So will Sammi and Rick Stevens hook up? :P
person Anon
schedule March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ok now I have to figure out how tall he is in feet/inches...
person MagicMau5
schedule March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok loved ch 2 as well...and I managed to calculate his height :) been a long time since I used metric. I love Sammi because I felt exactly like he did when I first moved abroad. I was so EFFING LONELY and there were huge crowds of people full of stupid happy couples cuddling. I wanted to hit them with a club. Although, I was the one having the loud sex, not the other way around. But it was because I was lonely, and it never filled the emptiness inside.
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story!!!!! I've only had time to read the first chapter, but it is FRAWESOME. I like the 1st person perspective, and the fact that he's European...does he have a hot accent? I also LOVE the colloquialisms and cursing, it makes it seem more realistic and edgy. Edgy is the best way to describe this - edgy and fresh. Keep on rockin' the pen! xoxoxo -magicmau5
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I liked the conversation Sammii had with his mom. They seem pretty close.

Was surprised about the fuck buddy not boyfriend lady. lol Good to know Sammi can still 'get busy' with Kevin w/o feeling guilty. :)

I wonder if Darren's ever going to show up. Isn't Sammi curious to find out why Darren broke up with him?

person eimim
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting so far, but there is one thing bothering me. Ieva is not a Finnish name, and I'm not sure if it's intesional or not.
Her last name is so typically Finnish that it sounds odd with her first name, and it's difficult to pronounce Ieva 'in Finnish'.

Eeva would be a normal, common Finnish name.


Sorry for harping on this. It really is a great story, and I can't wait to read more.
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah, great third chapter! Sammi's a funny guy! :)

Loved the two guys going at it in the soundproof room. That was too funny, and then their boss walks in. lol

Can't wait for the next update! :)

Oh, I noticed in chapter two, I think it was, that you spelled dictionary wrong. There's only one 'n', you spelled it dictionnary. Just in case you wanted to go back and change it...

Oh, and I almost forgot: I was curious about the Finnish names. Why isn't leva's name spelled with a capital 'l'? Even when it's at the beginning of a sentence it's spelled with a lower case 'l'.
person Lisa
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a terrific story so far! Pls excuse the typing. I'm on a bus headed for Vermont. Anyway great story! Can't wait for ch 3!
person Kirjava01
schedule January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You've got me hooked. Poor Sammi- why aren't the rest of his band/friends with him at the moment? Sounds like he needs a bit more support. I wonder how his interview went? I love the way you write and am definitely looking forward to more :)