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by Aya

person Ryn
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your stories for a few years but I have rarely commented. I have to say that I love everything you write though. Now I am making a suggestion about abstaining a new computer. I would try HSN or QVC since you can get it now and make monthly payments without interest and not on credit. You just need a credit or debit card and make 5 payments with HSN and 6 payments withers QVC. Right now to 8-23 there's one for 379.96 with payments at 63.32 for 6 months. I love your work so please keep writing.
schedule August 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just about died laughing with Blane's mulish "I'm not liking you right now" as he bows to Alex's will and shoved food in his mouth. The waitress was hilarious as well, leaving her number on the sly. You know what, I wouldn't mind reading short scene-like chapters like this.
person gcpeifer
schedule August 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 38 and 39:
That was awesome! Alex is getting stronger and stronger and I wonder if the drug Paul gave to Alex was really what Blane thought. I think Paul might perhaps know some things about Alex which Blane doesn't knows.Well, I don't know. Any way, ROFL about the end of chapter 39! This little note, for sure, will give Blane sleepless nights - aside from the fact that the waitress saw Alex as the dominant person at the table!
person KC
schedule August 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to see you posting chapters again... I had just been whiny that I had not seen a new chapter in so long and now there are three for me to enjoy. So sorry to see that your are having computer issues... what a sad thing, especially because I LOVE reading your story. I will glad take weird length chapters with typos while your computerless.
person Andrea
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, Alex is so cute. He sure has a brain between his ears, but sometimes it doesn't seem to switch on... Loved the final scene! And really can't wait to read more about Blane - are alphas allowed to be called "cute" at all?
person Kristen
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like how Alex is slowly but surely becoming the man in the relationship.
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My, but when my favorite stories are updated, I feel a warm, fuzzy feeling deep inside. I love how nervous Blaine gets whenever he hints at Alex taking over control between the sheets. I thoroughly adored the huff of jealousy Alex gave him when he realized where Blaine had been. How very sweet of Blaine to want to protect his sort-of mother. ^-^ He seemed to survive sharing Paul's bed well enough (if the bed was actually involved and not other surfaces ;D). Some chapters ago, the anxiety just about ate at him "who does he want? is it you? is it me? which is it?". In the end, Paul even covered him when it came to Alex and even gave him some sound advice (charge them hard, make them pay through the nose to get your funding). Such a good read. I only regret reading it so fast.
schedule August 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
<3 I really love when Alex is at his strongest as a character it just feels so right for him.
person yuurimaoh
schedule August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So many more questions...though, I'm glad Paul invoked that flesh debt to have Alex a little more covered. And he's breaking some more...what to do what to do? I'm just about dying for the next chapter already.
person Kristen
schedule August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have a strange fascination with Paul.