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for HusbandWife

by Aya

person SinfulMind
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Something new and original at last! Thank you :* The first two chapters are really encouraging and leave a desire for much much more of this goodie :D
person jazz
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fancy meeting you here :) Saw that coming, but it's a necessary development. Waiting for more.
person clovermax
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Scary really scary- to lose one's rights, one's identity due to legislation. Poor Alex.
person Kirjava01
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Totally holding out on what the G14 factor means :) Looking forward to see where this goes
person perkazy
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far! Can't wait to find out what that second marker actually means.
person ANU
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved the verbal battle, like watching ping-pong but without the overbearing dose of boredom
person Nine
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concepts, interesting set up.
the idea for the pronouns is intriguing. at first they annoyed me, i guess because i am not used to them. i can definitely see how they would make writing/reading a story where most of the characters are male easier though... less confusion over who the "he" belongs to...
i am definitely looking forward to more of this!!
person jazz
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it! :D I always look forward to your stuff but I never have anything to say other than "Good God, give me some more!" However if you are satisfied with that I will start leaving reviews ;)
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Of course all your works are awsome.
person Poohkie87
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ok so i can see that this is more the future of the two lovers world. I fully understand your disdain for rewrites... the whole thing about repeating yourself. anyway, Im looking forward to what you have for this story.

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