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January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, it's getting good now! MOAR!!!!!!!! =D
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January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes! More, more, more, more, more!
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January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your made up pronouns distract from the story. It may be fun for you as a way "to mess" with us or as some sort of exercise for yourself but it actually ruins the flow of your story.
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January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully Alex will be able to find a way to escape even if it is death and kill the jerk who enabled them to take his life and rights away before he goes.
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January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow. a week. arghy
at which point do they want to die- now that they no longer have their own identity
at which point do they want to die- now that they no longer have their own identity
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January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it
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January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it!
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January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please please pleeeeease moooooreeee I love this story so far! It's fantastic!!!
I can't wait for more!!! ;)
I can't wait for more!!! ;)
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January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the new story Ayato. I can't wait to read some more.
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January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story and I hope that there will be more back ground about the groups in coming chapter. Thanks for posting.