rate_review Reviews

I am glad to see the new Chapter... SAD to see it was the last chapter of the story. Hoping to see another Alex and Blaine story in the future (please!)

I was glad to see that Paul was not really broken as somehow that just seemed wrong.

I was also glad to see Alex beat on Abraham for being a jerk, even if it was all a rouse.

Looking forward to reading more of your stories when you get around to posting them.

Sequel???? Pleaseeeeeeee

Pretty please???

I have been reading this from the very beginning. I love your style of writing. The characters and world you created are awesome. I am sad to see that this is the last trouble and feel that there are so many questions we are left wanting answers for. Please write a sequel. Alex and Blane are such an adorable couple. Pretty please :)

Really, really like your story and the world you created... But this is the first time where I think this world would be a better one without any Alphas... Makes me wonder in which direction(s) this story might develop further. You truly are a great writer.

F**k argh ahhhh I love ur stories especially this one but fml I need footnotes or a study guide for this chapter I have to got back and read previous chapter when my head isn't do stuffed so as to make this make sense....reallllllly Hope Alex stabs Abraham 14 times mdjfjcjgjdivjf -_- <3

YAY they finally did it! I really did not see Alex breaking after sex...hmm I guess I never thought of events that could cause a crack in this world. The previous breaking does not seem to have any rhyme or reason 1)gets stab in hip by bone needle/ gets hipchecked/ Blane stands up for him 2)Someone asks for Alex's shirt... 3) sometime at Paul's city during the show or aftershow 4) sex. At first I thought it was any perceived traumatic expierence, but now there is sex, I do not think it was traumatic for Alex...

Oh my.... I didn't think I'd like this story as much as I did, then I got to the end of the last chapter and was like....wait, that's it?!?! No! Must have more!! It's similar to Partners, but different enough to still drag you into the world. Please update soon!

Alex...XD Such violent thoughts. Nice to know you'd defend your new family.

This story is awesome, I really love the setting. Alex and Blane are both interesting as is most of the characters. I got over the initial pronoun changes. Sometimes the story is confusing for me, but I guess that is because the story has not finished. I do not get why Paul would start a war, and I do not understand why Abraham would start it instead (is it because of the blood sample being taken? is that why Paul would start the war as well?). I do not understand why a female alpha would be important either, maybe it's because than they would be considered an alpha and would be able to breed without the governments "okay"? For me there are a lot of questions about the world and why's about why they do what they do (for instance Paul being sad after what happened and Blane's reaction to what happened on stage (at first I thought it was a rape, now I think he lost a husbandwife?).
Personally Alex is such a good character, independent without being annoying. I duno why the scenes where he is breaking seem to stick out in my head, I think I like it cause I feel that everytime it happens Alex steps out of his shell more and Blane seems to care more about him.

i absoultely love this story and cant wait for their to be more. the world and it's characters are so interesting. alex is a trip. i wouldnt know what to do with him. quin and robin are cool and i jaime also. it is interesting to watch how they interact with each other and watch how alex adjusts to the world hes been forced into. love it.