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by Aya

person Anon
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My word nazi in me is going postal.
Grammar is just shaking its bewildered head.
While nightmarish rulers flash before thine eyes of a hellish tourment.
I never went to a sister marybutch school of the holy order, ever.

Good story,keep up the malevolence for the angst ridden reader's
person midnightsscream
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol. This story amuses me. There's a good deal of giggles to be had, but not so much so that the story loses all it's seriousness and that it quite a balance to maintain. Great job!
person thatsnot cheese
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So a party and a trip are comming up! The bed scene was hot. Hoping for another update soon.
Cheers.
person thatsnotcheese
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So a party and a trip are comming up! The bed scene was hot. Hoping for another update soon.
Cheers.
person thirdly
schedule February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"well, I sleep in it and I like it, so it's mine.”

--LMAO! You just can't fight that logic, Blane, admit it.
person thatsnotcheese
schedule February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Casey's been sold!? I didn't see that coming! I wonder if the other HWs will hold this against Alex, or if they're more afraid for themselves...
Thanks for the update!
Cheers.
person KC
schedule February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I did not quite expect Erza's actions regarding Casey. Is it very mean of me to not feel sorry for Casey? Hopefully Erza will calm enough to reconnect with the Robin and Quin.

I like how things are looking up for Alex. He is able to learn and he is not being abused by his parents anymore. I like that Blaine is taking things slow with Alex, it is kind of like dating with extras.

person midnightsscream
schedule February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awh. I'm glad Alex is happy instead of a scared mess. I agree and hope he stays this way as well. The rigid planned out schedule of the day though would drive me insane. I like not knowing what I'm always going to be doing. great job! :D
person clovermax
schedule February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Its almost as though Alex is drunk
So Casey was sold. interesting world.
person KD
schedule February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Makes me wonder just what breaking entails. Seems to indicate that it takes your mind since you no longer care about your rights or your past self. Anyone else considered that Blaine's father may have plans he is keeping from Blaine Not a nice group of "people" at all. The thought of having to spend your life at their "command" makes you hope it is a very short one