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I like this story and I read every chapter as they update, but I've noticed something about the chapters that starting to get... stagnant. It's a lot of lines of dialogue, with very little set up. Like it seems to me that some of the conversations are just set ups for you to explain more about this world. Which is a great way to get information to the readers, under the guise of others explaining it to Alex, but I've noticed that the chapters just seem to be: Blane and Alex move to a new location, Alex gets stuff explained to him, Alex is snarky... End. It's getting a little boring for me. I don't want to stop reading the story, but I feel like I should just express how I'm feeling as a reader, because it's getting to the point where nothing is really happening plot wise, other than Alex is learning more. But his and Blane's relationship isn't evolving and now it's falling flat for me.

Great chapter (almost thought AA stood for Alcoholics Anon for a moment there when I first saw the chap title!)
Can't wait to meet this Paul! So he has multiple 'sex toy' alphas under him?
Please update soon! I always look forward to this fic!
Thanks for sharing.

Wonder what shade blue he chose.

It just gets better and better and I can't stay away from it. I say again, chocolate milkshake.

ch 20 : Oh Alex feels lonely! And probably bored, with Blane working all the time in the lab...I think chatting with Quin is a good idea, although I don't know how Quin's episodes will affect Alex. Anyway, he's an A and he will deal with them.:-)

And here we get to see finally more of this world you created, outside of the cosyness (minus Casey) of Esra's estate. And the ambivalence you put in here...(on the one side the humans have owe the Alphas everything, on the other side they despise them. I hope Blane and Alex can change this.)
This world is awesome, absolutely awesome! So close to the real world and yet extremely different.Thank goodness that you are such an amazingly fast updater, because this story is really thrilling. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

"...and hot gay men all over the place!”
He he he...
I hope Alex finds a friend (or Blane finds him one - it'll be a test of how well Blane knows Alex, in a way).
Also curious about Quin now... was this friend Quin's previous lover?...
Thanks for sharing!

He should totally get a pet anyways. Because honestly, pets are great.

Blane and Alex are adorable together. They really play off each other well. And YES!!!! Alex needs a friend. great job!

Perhaps it's just me, but despite all the chapters I still don't feel like I know enough about the "rules" of this world to understand what is going on. We get little pieces of things but not enough for me to make any sense of this world. If others are having the same thoughts, can you please flesh the "rules" out some?