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I am really loving this story. You are such a great author. The characters are amazingly well done, the world is so interesting, and I really enjoy how the interplay between the main characters. I can't wait for the next chapter every time you update. I got lucky on some of your other stories: by the time I got to them they were either already finished or close to it. I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.

HusbandWife is very interesting. At time I feel like I'm reading a Doctor Seuss book. Makes me really think and focus on what is really happening. I hope to see an update soon, keep it up your doing great.

OMG, he's so naive ahahahhaha. the prostate explanation cracked me up:D

Paul's city seems to be an amazing place.
Oh, I had no idea that public raised Alphas literally explode! I thought they would go berserk without any reason or so.But your idea of a wrong upbringing causing an Alpha to explode is interesting!
Alex, although has to be alone for some time? Maybe Paul's ring is really a good idea...
But I don't like Corey, he seems to me like half a mutt. Good thing that Alex, intelligent and bold as he is, showed him his place.
And I had to laugh so hard about the last paragraph! Alex is so intelligent, but when it comes to sex, he only knows what a 12 year old knows. No wonder that Blaine's hormones are boiling now!:-)

Woah, I didn't realize Alex was so naive about sex. lol. Seems like Blane is going to fix that...and if not...he really should. great job! :D

New reader here

Just wanted to say that i love ur story , i love Alex and Blane , they are cute together and i cannot wait to read more about them .
I don't like Peter though ~ i don't know why i don't like him , but i hope that he will leave from Blane & Alex's lives ~

Wow!!!: I think Alex has still a lot to learn about the rules of the Alpha world. At the same time I pity him since he never had a chance to learn about the meaning of love and the differences between love and sex.He lived in a loveless world where he was despised 'cause regular people didn't see him because they were afraid of him.
I can understand fully the danger an Alpha raised by regular people would mean. A ticking timebomb... I think in this world, only an Alpha could teach another Alpha how to control himself and, if possible to get into bloodrage.
Poor Abraham, but on the other hand, healing Abraham, I think it will be the chance for Blane to get out of this fleshdept he owns to Paul for the bloodsamples.
Sorry, I forgot something: Jane! Hahahaha! I hope she won't be stuck in a kind of chador when she travels in AA first or second class! I bet she would be fuming with rage!!!
Ah, this story is getting more and more interesting. You're doing an absolutely awesome job here, Ayato!

Great chapter! What's a 'public grown' alpha? An alpha raised in the normal world / without hes father? (Sorry if you've mentioned this previously and I've just forgotten...) So Dr Ab. can't have children? I wonder if Blane will invent something to help with that (and also maybe an mpreg for Alex...) Poor Abraham! Wonder what Paul will do/ has done to the offender...
As always, looking forward to more!

Awesome! I wonder why he's so cool with everything... and what Paul is going to do. Can't wait to read more :)

Every time I start to like this story you bring in something ugly. These alphas are nothing more than egotistical worthless scum who care for no one other than themselves. Too bad someone can't "break" them all and gift them around. It's all about ownership and having something that someone else wants.