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April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love your story miss your comments
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April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Abraham’s fascinating! So he was a child soldier... I wonder why Alex (and all the other alphas, actually) feels so drawn to him? Hope to learn more about Abraham!
And the government sanctioned ‘alpha mercy killings’? No wonder they’re all so paranoid!
Thanks!
And the government sanctioned ‘alpha mercy killings’? No wonder they’re all so paranoid!
Thanks!
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April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaaah! I'm done! No, no, no! I don't want to be done!
Anyway, like I thought, the pronouns weren't a problem at all, and I'm sorry that, it seemed to me, that it might have been for others- and, thus, you. The whole breaking thing is absolutely marvelous, so is the easy attitude towards casual sex, and the way an A acts- or Alex, at any rate. I love your characterization of all the females. And Blane is absolutely adorable!
I love this story, so, um... yea... Go 'head!
Anyway, like I thought, the pronouns weren't a problem at all, and I'm sorry that, it seemed to me, that it might have been for others- and, thus, you. The whole breaking thing is absolutely marvelous, so is the easy attitude towards casual sex, and the way an A acts- or Alex, at any rate. I love your characterization of all the females. And Blane is absolutely adorable!
I love this story, so, um... yea... Go 'head!
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April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I haven't even finished the first chapter, but I have work in the morning and wanted to say that your story has captivated me immediately. The dialogue flows and has the most exquisite tension. I have very, very, very particular tastes when I'm reading 'pop fiction'. What got me at first, though, was your willingness to use new pronouns. I'm writing a series of stories and thought of using new pronouns, but decided not to. I settled on something to be satisfied with, but it's wonderful to see it done. Plus, Alex has backbone, and there's that gorgeous brash of science with the genes. Honestly, so far, flawless for AFF. I'll drop by again when I've finished all the chapters- or when I've been once again pressed to leave a review. Good night.
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April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Been without internet for a week, and really missed this fic!!! So mutts don’t necessarily give rise to mutts... So a public alpha is either a spontaneous mutation(?) or is the illegitimate child of an alpha? That really interests me (sorry if I’m completely mixed up!) I love hearing about the alpha world you’ve created, and I can definitely see why the pronouns were important (sometimes they’re all I have to identify an alpha by!)
“That's adorable, that you think that gorgeous piece of ass will be enough for the rest of your life,” Corey growled out...” Alex and Blane are so cute together (and Alex is so innocent compared to Blane)! I feel so sorry for Drake...So not all alpha can be broken (even though thy carry the G14 gene)? I wonder if Alex will learn more about all this during the conference... Also wouldn’t have thought an alpha would be the sub during intercourse if given a choice, but Blane seems to imply that he enjoys it. Still can’t wait to meet Paul and Abraham!
Hope you had a great Easter! Thanks for the update!
“That's adorable, that you think that gorgeous piece of ass will be enough for the rest of your life,” Corey growled out...” Alex and Blane are so cute together (and Alex is so innocent compared to Blane)! I feel so sorry for Drake...So not all alpha can be broken (even though thy carry the G14 gene)? I wonder if Alex will learn more about all this during the conference... Also wouldn’t have thought an alpha would be the sub during intercourse if given a choice, but Blane seems to imply that he enjoys it. Still can’t wait to meet Paul and Abraham!
Hope you had a great Easter! Thanks for the update!
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April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hot chapter!
“, ...I would be hurting you down the line, in the future at some point that is beyond my control....you might not survive then” Ominous... so Blane might go into bloodrage and hurt Alex?!
Peter’s past is sad (sort of like what happened to his father, but not with the same impressive outcome...no wonder Peter seems to feel that he can never live up to his father). Hope Peter can get together with Blane and Alex! Also looking forward to meeting Abraham and Paul (esp. seeing as Paul knows what is going on between Peter and Blane, and Blane forced himself on Abraham (think i’m remembering it correctly)).
Thanks for the update!
“, ...I would be hurting you down the line, in the future at some point that is beyond my control....you might not survive then” Ominous... so Blane might go into bloodrage and hurt Alex?!
Peter’s past is sad (sort of like what happened to his father, but not with the same impressive outcome...no wonder Peter seems to feel that he can never live up to his father). Hope Peter can get together with Blane and Alex! Also looking forward to meeting Abraham and Paul (esp. seeing as Paul knows what is going on between Peter and Blane, and Blane forced himself on Abraham (think i’m remembering it correctly)).
Thanks for the update!
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April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28; *grinning broadly* Great chapter again!
So, now that the G14 marker is discovered, the Alphas are looking specifically for carriers with that marker? Interesting! I might be wrong, but this could mean that for the Alphas the G14 marker is kind of essential...
Oh, the dialogue between Blane and Jane...LOL! Jane seemingly doesn't know how to pick a man who would be able to become a real life-mate for her. She should feel happy that Blane looks out for her and kicks the bad ones away.
LOL, in the last chapter Alex fought so hard with Blane about meeting Abraham and now he's having a crush on hime? That's hilarious. I wonder what the Alphas would say about a foursome: Blane, Peter, Abraham and then - hugged by all of thyme - Alex!
Aaand I wonder what kind of stuffed animal Alex will make in that workshop.(Maybe a cat..??) :-)
So, now that the G14 marker is discovered, the Alphas are looking specifically for carriers with that marker? Interesting! I might be wrong, but this could mean that for the Alphas the G14 marker is kind of essential...
Oh, the dialogue between Blane and Jane...LOL! Jane seemingly doesn't know how to pick a man who would be able to become a real life-mate for her. She should feel happy that Blane looks out for her and kicks the bad ones away.
LOL, in the last chapter Alex fought so hard with Blane about meeting Abraham and now he's having a crush on hime? That's hilarious. I wonder what the Alphas would say about a foursome: Blane, Peter, Abraham and then - hugged by all of thyme - Alex!
Aaand I wonder what kind of stuffed animal Alex will make in that workshop.(Maybe a cat..??) :-)
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April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25-27. LOLOL! Well, Blane will definitely have a good time with Alex. I keep getting more surprises as the story gets updated. Like the conversation Blane has with Paul. I'm surprised also that Paul didn't flatten the ones responsible for Abraham's missing tube of blood. Hahahahah~ Oh the mayhem keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the rest! Thank you for the updates!
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March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thanks for story ......its very good^______^
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March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thanks for story ......its very good^______^