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for As It Seems

by Sonata

person cali84
schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh yay! finally something good for Teymo, I just want to hold him and tell him its all gonna be alright.
person asdf
schedule February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh!!!!HHAHAHAHAHA!!! i didn't recognize the wolves chasing teymo as part of bNb until the mention of the beast! that was cool. that transition into bNb was cool :D

can't wait to see if they develop a relationship!
person asdf
schedule February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah....and if it turns out that it was the wizard who cursed the beast....lol...that would be so sweet. evil, but sweet. like, the wizard planned for the beast to be teymo's beau or something. sort of? idk. but yeah XD

also forgot again to say, thanks for the update! i enjoyed it! i always look forward to your updates for this story!
person asdf
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
woo! so excited to read i'm posting this first XD

*reads*
person animekid
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Man this is depressing; is it ever going to get better? Ever? I'm sobbing almost every chapter now.
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. You have done a very good job keeping it fairytalesque. I am enjoying the differant influances and also appreciate that you have made it your own. I was skeptical about it midway through chapter three but am still curious where you are taking this. The wizard is very realistic and I like that he has failed as a father. Poor confused young man. Update soon.
person asdf
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awww poor teymo. all alone. if a hundred years have passed i guess that makes him like, older than everyone else XD awesome chapter. it takes an asshole to rape a sleeping person and i think you captured that well lol
can't wait to see where teymo goes next!
person asfdf
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah, thanks for the update! i enjoyed it
person sabaku_lotus
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First part was brutal. Wow. Due to a bunch of idiots his whole perspective of sex changed for the better or the worse.

I hope things work out. The Wizard means well (I guess,) and its not the boy's fault. Wait is he going to fall in love with a werewolf?!
person asdf
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
well that was interesting XD
i'm seeing rapunzel, sleeping beauty, and in the AN hints beauty and the beast? IDK but i like the fairy tale aspects.