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What an amazing story!  It really had some if the feel of an old fairy tale. There's was a moment where I suddenly realized how his background made him perfect for the beast. I see what you did there. Very clever and will executed. I know several people who need to read this. A new favorite of mine. Xoxo Robin

What seemed to start off as Rapuzel, morphed in to sleeping beauty and finally ended as Cinderella. A beautiful fairy tale though not for any children to read. Thank you for the amazing story and I hope to read more form you soon,m

I agree this needed more reviews. I really liked this. I'm glad you didn't take the depressing route for this as well. The ending was nice but I hate to see that your muse kind of died out like that.

Still a very good read.

ughhhhh freaking aff ate my review!!! i hate when that happens!!
anyway just wanted to say congrats on finishing and thanks for sharing this story with us!

even if you think it's abrupt i think it ended at a good place. nice conclusion :)

4 serious though 10k reviews for 9chapters are really good stats. i wonder if people are re-clicking into the story just to re-read and jerk off at the porn part LOL.

anyway yeah. i guess people are either shy or stingy with reviewing XD but uh....congrats on finishing! i enjoyed reading this story and seeing all the fairy tales.

This was the perfect end to a great tale. Good work! :)

This was an absolute joy to read. I must admit I did skip a little of chapter 2, but not much. I am also mostly a lurker but there are a few gems I comment on and this definitely one. I loved how deeply you seem to have developed Teymo (even if you didn't it came across like you gave his character a great deal of thought). And I loved the father, his flaws were very real and made a good addition to the story. And of course the beast, yay! I love that you added the different fairy tale themes. Great job on this and keep up the good writing. And don't feel bad for abrupt endings, they are much better than (or is it then?) no ending, so thank you for sharing a part of yourself with us.

This is a great mesh of fairy tales. I love it so far and cannot wait for the next installment.

you need to ask for reviews :) you got a lot of hits but you deserve a lot more reviews.
anyway that was interesting...

one thing i'm craving is that the beast is too much of a goodie two shoes. then again he has to be. but people aren't normally that nice especially if you've got it in your head that you're a monster. i'd like to see some angst or bad qualities (that can be changed/transformed later on) from the beast XD

some nice mental healing 8)
thanks for the update!

awww bottling it up. well some deep conversation should fix that up. :D

invisible servants oh la la lol
surprised that the beast didn't take advantage of that XD

anyway yay!