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I love your story!!! I'm so excited you updated. I've never read a story in a western setting and I really like it!

Ahh, this story is so amazing! I'm not really familiar with the "old western" genre, but this - the setting and characters - just suck me up. I love the way the characters talk, and how they think. The whole setup of the story is interesting, dramatic, and the right bit of dangerous. It's an outlaw romance, I guess, but I absolutely adore how Jessie is so unforgiving of Bose, stands up for himself while still being realistically terrified, and even now, there's this weirdly attractive element of Jessie hating Bose and just doing what he can to survive, but it starts to feel like he also might be warming up just a tiny bit to the devil (but we don't know for sure, I guess, part of the deal he made with Bose was to act that way.) Of course, with Bose's new demand that'll wither up pretty quickly if it was even there. I love the direction this is going. What will Jessie do? Sell his cattle and try to run away without Bose catching him? Relent and go with him? What will Bose's men think? They seem to be impressed with how Bose "made a woman out of a man" but if they see Bose treating Jessie like a lover they might change their minds... then again, since Bose has also been with a lot of women they probably don't think of him as "gay", or whatever people thought of men who sleep with men in the 1800s. Anyway, I'm excited to see an update and hope you'll have the time to update again, soon! Thanks a ton for posting this!

I love your story!!! It's my first time reading a western setting story but WOW. I love how rough and sweet Bose can be to Jessie and how possessive he is. I would love to see more of Bose being possessive and jealous like in the end of chapter 3 and 4. I'm so excited for the next chapter, I wanted to know Bose reaction to that punch from Jessie. Keep up the good work and please UPDATE!!!

I have to tell you that I am enjoying your story. It is very interesting to watch their feelings toward each other evolving.
And highly entertaining to watch Bose's awkward attempts at wooing Jess. Please finish this story. You're doing a great
job....better than you realize.

So, so, so very happy to see an updated chapter on this story. I was afraid there weren't going to be any more and that made me sad. Thanks again!

Pretty good so far, yeah it's a rape fic and thats not normally my thing, but this is written pretty well and not crass ya know...

I have a review thought up. But it'll only work with the whole story. So if this story is seen to its end and it matches the review I've thought up, I'll put it up. Promise.

I love your story, it's so rare that I read gay Western ones. But I'm hooked! Thanks!

thank you!!!!! it was such a welcome surprise to see that you had posted another chapter! i really appreciate your hard work! I am so freaking sick today and i was about to go out and get some medicine... but it is freaking COLD outside... I cant thank you enough for cheering me up!!! this story is just utterly fantastic. I LOVE EVERYTHING about it!!!!!!!! how do you do it??? you are amazing! I have been thinking about this story the whole time... and stressing that maybe you had abandoned it. i am so relieved to see that you are still going! i love you! and Bose is just one of the best characters ever. i LOVE a good psychopath.

Great update ! It was worth the wait ! :)
I think Bose is in love. Even if he doesn't know it yet.
Love your story !