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January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am totally into this story. Your doing a great job with it. I will review more later whe I have more time. Thanks for the good reading. I hope you update soon.
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January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is amazing. It is well written and it has a solid plot. My only problem with it is, shouldn't Jessie be more, I don't know, scared of Bose? Traumatized maybe? He just seems kind of okay with what Bose did and that he is going to keep doing it. And here is nothing I hate more than when people romanticize rape. And why doesn't Jessie just sell his cattle and land if he doesn't really care about them? Shanks suggested that he visit his aunt, but Jessie was all "my cattle" but then later he said he didn't care if people were killing them.
But anyway I really love your style of writing and how the characters are developing. I hope to see more in the future!
But anyway I really love your style of writing and how the characters are developing. I hope to see more in the future!
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Can't wait for more!
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit *grabs chair and popcorn* dis gon be guud! XD Hey congrats on doing so well with your first story on the site! I always struggle to get reviews for my own stories lol
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this so much. Jessie is adorable, and Bose is bad ass as hell. Seriously. Love it!
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
such a mean cliffhanger...:((((((( I hope you rescue me from it soon:D
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this! Looking forward to the next chapter :D
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is Dano jealous of Jessie or something? Why the hell is he trying to get him killed? Wow! Good chapter! I'm freaking out for Jessie now big time, please update soon!!!
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! I am so nervous for Jessie!!! I can't even deal! Please please please please please please please please please please update soon for my piece of mind!!! I am like seriously biting my nails I am so anxious!!!
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
evil evil you had to end it thereXDDD i can't wait for the next chaper^.^