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by Twistedyetsweet

person Anon
schedule November 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just saw your author name listed as being online does that mean you'll be updating soon?! I certainly hope so but if not that's ok too.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! You did update!!!! This is my guilty sick pleasure to read....... I hope they use more toys on Julia and use different kind of restraints and stuff. When they are not using her, keep all her holes filled to keep her stimulated and open. Nipple clamps are always nice too. Oh, how large are her breasts? What is her hair/eye color? Thanks for updating! I hope you can update regularly instead of waiting a few months because I love reading stories like this. I know it's just fantasy so no one is really getting hurt because it's not real or really happening, thank God.
person DirtyLittleSlut
schedule November 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I know it's crazy of me but I love stories like this but only because I know they are fantasy so no one is really getting hurt. I wish you could update at least once a week, pretty please......
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story!
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Please correct your disclaimer


It does not contain one of the required elements (resemblance). It can be worded however you, the author, likes, provided that it is clear you are saying that any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.


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Please remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.

person San59
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it! next chapter please!
person Nuki
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. Please update soon. :)