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November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, hope snatched away twice in one chapter. I'm still loving the plot but as for the writing, I feel like the word screamed is being a bit over used. Maybe try swapping it out for some new words? Just a thought from a fan :) Hope to see more soon!
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November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! Is their whole family in one this?! They kind of remind me of the Adam's family, creepy and spooky, LOL. I kind of wished they punished her more for actually getting away from them for a short time even though she didn't escape from their clutches. I think they are being too nice but guess they are anxious for their new baby. I was so excited seeing you had uploaded another new chapter so soon and hope you can keep it up. Have a nice day!
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November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update and another entertaining chapter but I hope things start to get easier for this poor girl.
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November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wanna see them use nipple clamps on her, plus on her clit, maybe give her body piercings and tattoos so she will be officially owned by them. I hope they use more toys on her too and keep her chained up in different ways all the time. Plus, she needs more PUNISHMENT, and the more painful the better, cackles evilly.......... I would like to see her try and escape again but they catch her right outside the cabin and then they can play more with snow torture!!!!!
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November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, she almost did get frostbit in the most painful place thanks to Miles! Oh dear, their mother knew they were planning this that is just so scary. Poor Julia! I do enjoy reading what you have them do to her though so me bad.
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November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope she gets away! I don't want to think what will happen to her should they find her.
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November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd, thank you! I've been waiting for an update and have been checking back and forth all day.
I loved the part with Miles putting snow one her private part and wish they could have played more with it like on her breasts too.
Wow, how creepy knowing their mother is ok with all this.
I hope she doesn't fall for them but she just might. I hope she still fights so she gets punished some more.
I loved the part with Miles putting snow one her private part and wish they could have played more with it like on her breasts too.
Wow, how creepy knowing their mother is ok with all this.
I hope she doesn't fall for them but she just might. I hope she still fights so she gets punished some more.
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November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why but thought of the horror thriller, The Hills Have Eyes or Wrong Turn reading this latest chapter. This family is crazy and I love it. I mean poor Julia thinking the mother would help her but now she's going to be probably examining her and helping with the birth of her grandchild. Is she is midwife? I am glad she didn't get away because then this story would be over and I don't want that not for a long while.
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November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I love quick updates ^.^ And I love how this story is progressing. I can see some sexy scenes on the horizon when they catch her.
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November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wanna see Julia get punished and the more painful the better, haha. I was wondering is this cabin they are in right now just a lay-a-way place they use for hunting and will they will be taking her to their real home after winter? It seems kind of small by the description.