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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is he crazy? He doesn't think Sebastian will find out? Poor Oliver is gonna get his butt whooped!!! Great chapter!
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February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
o this can only end badly....
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February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sebastian is an evil asshole and I hope that sooner or later Oliver figures it out and leaves him. Who the heck cares about debt when you are being treated like a slut with no brains! I hope Oliver ends up with Brandon or Phillip.
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February 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy I can sort of see where the fuck this might go.
I like.
I like.
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February 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonder what Sebastian's deal is. I wouldn't mind finding out more about his past.
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February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not sure what to make of this chappie. I'm surprised Oliver's not pissed off for being punished like a child. Poor Ollie can't even leave the apartment now without Sebastion's permission?! Sebby is turning more and more into an abusive control freak. I wonder what would happen if Ollie starts asking more questions about his debt? Does Sebby have ANY intentions of letting Ollie go... kinda scary when I think about it. Look forward to the next chappie :) !
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February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this can really be a great story if it didn't seem so rushed? I'm on the second chapter and already I feel like I'm missing the parts leading up to this point that's just my way of seeing your story. I'm really not trying to offend you but I hope you understand what I'm saying.
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January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story I feel bad for Oliver wonder if Sebastian will change
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January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if the drink girl (damn already forgot her name!) will try to corner Oliver and interogate him on why he was there with the business guys? And as for Oliver's debt he wouldn't be able to really pay it off by being Sebastion's whore could he? What about actual money, we know he doesn't want to be in the city forever. So how will Oliver plan to leave if he does out of the city? Sorry for all the questions, I just feel bad for Oliver's situation :( .
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG I KNEW IT, A TOTAL SNAKE IN THE GRASS! Poor Oliver, he must feel so trapped now with no way out :( !