rate_review Reviews

Damn, you can write! I gotta say, that was probably one of the best, if not THE best story I've read on this site. I read your other Original, too, and couldn't stop reading till I'd finished it. Congrats! Whatever it is that makes a good writer, you've got it. The only way I can see to improve is to read over the story before posting, to be sure it makes sense. Thanks for the stories, though. They're great!

Damn, this is hot,