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January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1-10. Woot! Marathon read! Love the development of the story so far and the characters are awesome! Can't wait for more updates. Keep up the awesome writing!
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January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great job for the fic......want to read more....updated soon...
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January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yea, I love it! Yea for Apollo kicking ass, yea for the cheating sluts getting what's coming to them. I want to know what Ryker's brother needs to tell him though. PLEASE update soon!
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January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was too short!!! Don't lose your muse!!!! I wonder what happens to viper!
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January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was sooooo good, can't wait for chapter 10. Wonder what Jeta's plan is because I know that he is up to something.
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January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
still here. still reading!! I wrote a long review but somehow it wasn't posted by AFF.net -.-'' ...twice now.
I liked the exchange between Apollo and Jeta: it was like a careful dance of words, of minds. To say enough not to draw unwanted attention upon yourself and, at the same time, to be aware of the intention and suspition your adversary has towards you. it reminded me of a chess match.
However I was surprised by Apollo giving away Camilla's name so easily... won't Camilla be harshly punished for letting Ryder escape and fall victim to Jeta's anger since Apollo hasn't given his uncle a valid motive to be reprimanded?
The morning after was really tender :) they begin to like each other and not to be merely attracted physically.. :D
I liked the exchange between Apollo and Jeta: it was like a careful dance of words, of minds. To say enough not to draw unwanted attention upon yourself and, at the same time, to be aware of the intention and suspition your adversary has towards you. it reminded me of a chess match.
However I was surprised by Apollo giving away Camilla's name so easily... won't Camilla be harshly punished for letting Ryder escape and fall victim to Jeta's anger since Apollo hasn't given his uncle a valid motive to be reprimanded?
The morning after was really tender :) they begin to like each other and not to be merely attracted physically.. :D
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January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is why I avoid WIPs because I want to throttle you for making me wait. I love it!
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January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awsome action packed, only one critism for this chapter, way too short!
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January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is so interesting! I'm craving more!! Please update soon!
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January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooo this is a great distraction from my own story, keep it up please!!!