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December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story. It didn't end in the conventional "happy ending" but I also didn't find it sad. The ending seemed fitting for what he wanted and it didn't appear to be as much a death as a change of form. Thanks for writing and sharing.
lunamist
lunamist
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December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this, Please continue!
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December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it! :)
I was a little reluctant to read it at first, because it seemed like a very dark story, but I finally caved. And I'm glad I did ^_^ I can only hope that the ending is not going to be as tragic as I cannot help but imagine it right now...
I was a little reluctant to read it at first, because it seemed like a very dark story, but I finally caved. And I'm glad I did ^_^ I can only hope that the ending is not going to be as tragic as I cannot help but imagine it right now...
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December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is really good ! I just can feel the despair of the boy...
Death will become his path if he something happen with the mysterious man !
Thanks for the fast update :)
Death will become his path if he something happen with the mysterious man !
Thanks for the fast update :)
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December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! What a great story plot. Very original and well written. Can't wait for the rest of it.
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December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
got me curious... I really want to know when the god of sand will appear ^^
very good story :) I loved the writing
please continue
very good story :) I loved the writing
please continue
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December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah. Very interesting beginning. Though i felt it was a little inconsistent that he would seek freedom by giving up his "heart and soul" to someone...thats like...how do people say it..."jumping out of the frying pan and into the fire". hehe. do update soon!
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December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is good ! I like it so far...
Thanks for sharing :)
Thanks for sharing :)
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December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and inexplicit it may be, but it's an interesting start. ;) I'm looking forward to reading more. Quite the intriguing premise.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu