rate_review Reviews

Wonderful fic. Very original.

I love it! Specially the ending. It was kind of like a legend. It was beautiful in its own way. :)

Wow!!!! I loved this story as well! Mythical, feverish and so utterly human that I loved how he made his choice and was happy with it. Super amazing <3

Whoa

Whoa

The hell? I wanted to beat that father's ass.

I kind of like this. It's weird and trippy and sort of cool. Even if it ends on a bad note (with death and hell everywhere or one dies and the other has to live on,) I'll keep on reading it.

The bride was not bad but will suffer for the grooms selfish choice. Will this lead the village into war with the brides family? This is very much like the story "Brokeback Mountain" . This story tries to focus on the romantic thread going on throughout the tale, but it makes me riled up at the social implications for those left behind. The wives are always hurt the most. I imagine if you wrote a sequel, the bride would have been executed for his crimes and she would roam the desert as a demon. Or something like that! Maybe her anger and bitterness would turn her into an evil woman. A woman scorned...
It is hard to appreciate the romance b/n Sunua and the groom.

I'm not much of a fantasy person....But THIS WAS GREAT!!!! I love the story. The ending was nice too but I wish I could get some more!! Nice Job.

This was very very cute an beautiful!!!Loved it~

The end ? I know you said it was a short story but maybe it needs an epilogue...
I would like to know about the other world.
But maybe it's another story ! :))

A beautiful ending. I don't regret giving it a try, because despite the ending of the two lovers' human life, the story permits us to interpret this as more than a mere death ; personally I would like to think that they stayed together, in whichever form, and are going to be happy forever after. (why, yes, I'm a sucker for HEA). Thank you! :)

This was a very good story. While I was a little wary at first, thinking maybe it was a darker piece of fiction, it turned out to be very cute. Great read. :)

xoxo,
kitkat