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for Introducing Paige

by RenoTurk

person Ava
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah finally a M/F. For some reason this site is getting more M/M action. Not that there's anything wrong with that category but its not really my flavor. This is an interesting story you've got here...lots of typos, especially toward the end and the errors blend in pretty easily. Nothing that really impedes the reading but thought I'd point it out all the same. Red2 is kind of an odd name. I can't really see it being screamed out in the heat of passion. I also didn't quite figure out if he's an artificial created being or just a genetically modified human.

person ana maria
schedule December 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
excelente, espero muy pronto nuevos capitulos, ana maria
person beccaky
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Red2 is such a sweetheart.