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for The Were King's Heir

by wolfkin59

person anxiouslyawaitingupdate
schedule March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please, I need more. Caimus is adorable and I like the dynamic between Jaden and the Sire (btw, does he have a name and when do we get to learn it?). I loved the part where Cai one-ups both of them and they realize they have to call a truce because there's an impressionable young kit around that they need to set a good example for. I'm going to be waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter, so please try to update soon! No pressure, though. I completely understand that real life can sometimes get in the way, so just do your best. I don't usually review, in part cuz I'm usually on my iTouch and it's a hassle so I don't normally bother. But that's how much I loved your characters and how much I got into your story that I felt the need to ask for more.
person LS
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this one. PLEASE continue it
person smint45
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story sso far and I'm eagerly waiting for more^^ See you again!!!
person midnightsscream
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE it!!!! I want the wereprince to grow up, but right now the sire and two weres are amusing all on their own. great job and can't wait for the next chapter! :D
person kissedbymidnight
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. Usually I only really read stories with romance as the center, but so far this story has had no problem keeping my interest. The heir seems really intriguing. He's very powerful, but he doesn't seem to abuse it. He just plays and imitates and I'm excited to watch him grow up and learn more about him. I also like Jaden. He's not the typical parental figure, but he seems to care for the Prince and seems like he'd be the very loyal type if you could just earn his loyalty.

I'm looking forward to reading more!:) I do hope there will be some lasting romance in here somewhere when the Prince becomes older, because I love romance and with how powerful the Prince is it would be interesting to see who he falls for. Would he pick a mate who was strong and could keep up with him? Or would he want a more submissive, more caring mate? Maybe there would be someone even he would submit to? At least in that way? I'm also curious how the Weres will react when they find out one so powerful is gay. Will we get to see the Prince figure that out or will he always know? So many questions!:) Anyway, while I like romance this story seem like it will have no problem keeping my attention. It's very well written. Thanks for sharing.
person SunaoTsuji
schedule January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-2. I'm loving how this story is going. I'm curious now as to how the story will develop. Definitely looking forward to more updates. Thanks for writing and uploading! Greatly appreciate it!
person Nine
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so sweet! i am definitely looking forward for more! Caimus is incredibly cute, i just love his antics. I think it is hilarious and sweet how the head vampire is so concerned with raising him. the caretaker guy i lovely also. i pretty much died from the cuteness of his first meeting with caimus.
this world is interesting and i like where the story starts. i am really eager for more!

person ls
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Starting off nice. Love the kit. Please continue this.
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I am already loving this story. I adore were stories anyways but the added vampire twist makes it more enjoyable. I think Caimus is adorable and like Jaden already. I even like the vampire sire too. Please update regularly. This story is going to be awesome!
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far, looking forward to more :)