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I was just thinking......why would Stiles care where in the house he blew them up? He took Jesse to a part of the house he was never really in? Why wouldn't Stiles just take him to the bathroom they always used; why would he care if the whole house blew? He was going to be dead anyway? Right? Unless he was bluffing or something...now I don't know.

Holy shit Babette, what the fuck just happened? Stiles KNEW Jesse was wired? That earring with the transmitter was put on one of the dead bodies? It wasn't Jesse?

So what, the whole explosives-on-Stiles'-body wasn't real? Did he take Jesse somewhere a little further away from the house and it was rigged and he had some remote control device that blew the house up so everyone thought they were dead? And now he disappeared to some foreign country WITH JESSE?? This is horrible. Well, it's great that Jesse is alive, but how the fuck are they gonna find him since they think he's dead?

And I'm a little confused with that whole scene with Miranda and CJ. Who the heck is CJ? Did he hire Miranda to investigate Stiles? And why was his birth certificate made five days after he was born?

Oh Babette, you updated twice today and I know you won't update again today and I'm on fucking pins and needles here....I may have to find some crack dealer to hook me up with some Xanax to get me thru until the next update. lol

Ah, now I know why Stiles took Jesse to the other bathroom....thanks to cinnamon. lol I admit I was confused when the fireman told Vernon the explosion was in the master suite. Just to throw everyone off his track....so fucking clever. Ok, off to find my Xanax dealer, lol.

Yay! 2 chapters for me to read. I hate Devin with a passion. I'm glad Kyle's all right though I wish he'll have full recovery soon. I like this Detective Murphy. She's kinda bad ass. I wish this woman detective will kick Devin's ass to the next county. And Chris seems to have the right connections. I hope he brings out the big guns soon and wipe Devin's face all over the city. Danny, I seriously don't know what to feel about him. He brought it to himself so I can't feel sorry for him right now.

Holy shit, Devin is a psycho! I can't believe he killed Danny, (he may have just as well done it himself), right in front of Jesse! And now he's threatening to off Chris if Jesse makes one wrong move. Shit.

I do like Adrian though. Her arresting Jesse was just a ploy to get him out of there, right? And the whole martyr bit at the end, was just icing on the cake. lol

Great update. I'm looking forward, (anxiously on pins and needles), to the next one. :)

Go Lady go! To write so well so quickly is indeed a gift. Thank you for sharing it. Now, the greedy part comes out......PLEASE continue.

No Kyle NO!!!!!!!!!!! I can't think, that is all I could say.

Holy hell Babette! Did Devin just SHOOT KYLE???? THINKING HE WAS JESSE????? He is fucking psycho!!!!

And Chris, being the older one, maybe should have forseen this coming. Didn't they all know Devin wouldn't let go of Jesse, especially since Jesse tied him up and left him there? Did Jesse really think just b/c he sent a break-up text that Devin would go quietly into that good night. Hahah, lame, sorry, couldn't resist. =)

And what a ridiculous plan Jesse came up with. Seriously. That would never work. He really thought that he could sleep with all of Devin's business friends and social friends, men, women, married, single, break up marriages and they would all fall so in love with him they would cut all ties to Devin once they found out that Devin was blackmailing him? No matter that they know Devin far longer than they know him. Jesse, Jesse, Jessse.....not an educated plan. lol

Ok, I'm anxiously awaiting chapter eighteen! Great job Babette! :)

Hey Babette; so glad you're feeling better! :)

If it's any consolation, your writing is most awesome even when you're not feeling well. (Did I already say that in a review, I can't remember)

Devin, what a sick fuck he is, huh? Bet they're all wishing he never stepped foot in Chris' company's door. He really stooped to an all new low: bribing, (or however he got Danny to lie to Mags), Danny, shooting Kyle, it would never stop. And now Jesse has endure being raped all day b/c of this sick asshole.

I wonder if Chris and Luke will figure out where Jesse went.

Damn girl, now I'm on pins and needles.....back to hitting the refresh button. :) Oh, and I fucked up the quote: I was supposed to write Devin will not go gentle into that good night, not quietly. But either way, he's not going quiet or gentle anywhere! Especially you-know-where. lol

Hope your back gets better soon