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Hahah Babette! As I was reviewing the last chapter, YOU UPDATED!!! Yay!

Ok, now I'm gonna read it. lol

Holy shit Babette!!!!! It's not over!!!!!!! But thank God they found Jesse! And Manny! What's gonna happen to poor Manny?

Adrian working for Stiles? Blackmailed? Totally did not see that one coming! But it doesn't surprise me; nothing about that lunatic would surprise me know.

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! :)

Oooo my god im so glad they r back together, cannot wait for the rest of the story ^__^

Sorry for the spoilers, I wasn't thinking. I write stories involving mysteries too and there are certain 'skeletons' used in this genre that writers use. I haven't come across any writer who doesn't follow it, but it's any writers' trick, I guess - state what isn't entirely real, be vague on what is and reveals come in later.

I can see the plot thickens. Let's just hope I don't lose all my fingernails, the anxiety urges me to gnaw at them.

Haha Babette; it's all the L&O SVU's and the CSI's I used to watch! lol

But damn, Devin is even more of a psycho. He killed his own flesh and blood and he'll kill Jesse once he's tired of him.

I think Chris better fill Adrian in on this little expedition he's taking. She can contact the authorities down in Brazil, the US Embassy, and the local police in whatever state or town they're in.

I'm so excited now! Can't wait for the next update! :)

You know Babette, I was just thinking that Stiles must have planned this out for awhile b/c he had all the fake documentation for Jesse and he obviously got Jessie a passport, and that always takes some time. How he do that w/o a picture? Oh shit, how about VISA's? You can't get in Brazil w/o some sort of VISA. Like the states. But unlike the states, I'm not sure if you can sneak into Brazil. lol

I hope Chris and Co. don't run into problems getting down there with immigration and all.

You know you have a terrific story Babette, when your readers are still thinking about it HOURS after they read the latest chapter! lol

Without our beloved Jesse? You mean he's ...no, you didn't, tell me I'm reading it wrong, pleease!!!! He will be ok, right?

Holy fucking shit ! I have just started reading this story n finished within a day, its so bloody good. Omg i dnt wanna wait for the nx chapter....its had my heart racing so much from the very beggining ,ive been desperate for a new story to read n think ive just found my nx obsession ^__^
Keep up the good wrk PLEASE <3
Oh if u have a mailing list id love to be put on it xx

Oh boy, you're in a roll. To be honest, I didn't feel a wee bit sad about Jesse dying because I strongly believe he isn't dead. At all. This trick Devin has up his sleeves is pretty clever... something that would lead people to believe they were dead to get them off Jesse's back. Pretty clever indeed. The explosion occurred in the master suite while Jesse mentioned Devin led him to the bathroom at the opposite wing. So there. Devin is one sonofabitch who plays really dirty I wish he does die for realz, tortured first to the worst degree then die a painful death.

WHAT DO YOU MEAN "WITHOUT OUR BELOVED JESSE"??????????????? You didn't seriously make him die in that explosion with that psycho motherfucker, did you??????

Thank God I didn't get to this chapter BEFORE you updated again!!!!

On to the next one.....shit Babette; I gotta take some Xanax or something...if only I knew where to get some. :)