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I've always loved to write, but I love to read more. I did not review for every single chapter but I will review your story as a whole.
The first arc was a nice steady flow from how Jesse grew out of his "I wanna Fuck all the cute guys" to a more compassionate man. The rest of story however, was jittery almost. It was like you had this idea and in trying to explain it just made it the story instead of slowly planning it out. There were allot of iffy moments but overall a good read. I will be reading your works too. Keep doing what you do best!

this was a well written and interesting story. it was a little too dark for my taste, but i dont regret reading it. this is the first time ive read a gay wedding and i think it was done very well. i read this story because "i didnt know u were real" is my favorite story on aff to date. that story is the best and this one is good.

This was a magnificant story. I throughly enjoyed it and I thank you for sharing it.

This was one hell of a story. I laughed and cried. I wanted to smack some of the character. I cheered them on. I love the M/C. What a great story

Wow this story was absoloutly amazing^^I'm so glad that you posted this!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!

How the story turned surprised me, I can say in a very good way ! I loved them all !
Thank you for your story.

A french mother,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth

"Two of the hottest men alive are right here and I've boffed them both." Omg, that was hysterical! lol

I was ready to smack Chris upside his head when he was being such a martyr and headed up to break up with Jesse, "for is own good". Thank God he didn't go thru with it. And thank God Luke and Kyle got back together; I think they make an awesome couple.

'Nsync's "This I Promise You" is such a terrific song for Jesse and Chris. I love 'Nsync; my now fourteen year old got me into them when he used to sing "Bye, Bye, Bye" constantly. lol

This was such a terrific story Babette and I'm so sorry it's over. I will really miss the gang. :) I purposely waited awhile to read this b/c I knew I'd be so sad when it was over.

Excellent story Babette! :)

I really like this story and am sad to see it end. By the way, I noticed the summary description seems to be missing and it just says 'complete'. I almost passed it by and just thought you would want to know in case anyone reading it almost misses it like I did. I know a good summary is what draws me into a story.

Holy shit Babette! Who did Jesse get to off Devin? And I thought he wanted Devin to suffer in jail for the rest of his miserable devilish life?

The whole scene with Devin's men and the safe house under attack was amazing! What a terrific job you did at writing that! I was on pins and needles, on the edge of my seat. I was scrolling down the page line by line b/c I was afraid of what I was going to read next! :)

Ok, on to the next chapter! Hope you're having a great weekend away Babette! :)

Omg, when Chris and Jesse were screaming at each other in the club my mouth fell open! I was hoping it was a ruse. And boy, what a twist Babette! Palmer was one of the FBI guys; that fucking traitor! Hope they hang him for treason, oh, I guess they can't do that, but hope they hang him for attempted murder, that's it. lol

LOVED, LOVED, LOVED the scene in the prison! Devin the Devil becoming Giff's beyotch! :) I would have loved to see his face when Butch told him who he was. That would have been priceless!

Awesome chapter Babette! I can't believe only one more is left. I'm really gonna miss this story. :(