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for Husband for the Holidays

by projectamy

person Tay
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Preston an the babies stay, an Carter's mother showing up I wonder if he will forgive her. Please update soon
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
They need to go out on a date and discuss their feelings. I wonder if the club is in jeopardy, with the coke dealing. The babies are adorable. Yay for Carter and his mom starting to talk.
person Mint
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am absoultey luvin' this right now! Please update asap!!!!!
person Ls
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter
person dut
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw... Why can't these men be more honest. They are all assuming one another...so fun. Thank you!
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg Amy, chapter four was hysterical! From Carter showing Preston exactly how he has sex in his office, to Preston shoving Beckett under the faucet; I was cracking up the whole chapter! Shit, and I kept yelling at my screen, Tylenol and a warm bottle; that'll make Beckett feel better.

Glad to see Preston is unknowingly getting to Carter. And of course Carter is getting to Preston too. But I especially love that the babies are attached to the both of them.

Great job Amy. Ok, on to chapter five....
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love when you get on a roll with a story! I can't wait until next chapter and more yummy Preston/ carter cuteness :)
Xoxo
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! This chapter was soooooo good. I want to lock both Carter and Preston in a broom closet and then lock the door until they confess their love to one another. I loved how Preston tried to decorate. I like the introduction of Carter's mom and she seems like a very nice lady. I get a kick out of Beckett and how he seems to know just the right moment to pull something and then Cameron picking up on it. I also like how little Beckett is starting to 'resemble' Carter in Preston's eyes, LOL. I got all teary eyed with the twins saw their parents picture and think it's wonderful how Preston always shows it to them and tells them about their parents so they don't forget them. Ok, any chance of another fast update?!!! Huggles.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wishing you and your loved ones a very Merry Christmas! I've been so busy preparing for the holiday so have to make this short. I LOVED IT and I love Carter/Preston and Beckett/Cameron! This story is going to become a classic holiday family/love story. ~~~ Katie ~~~
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whew! All caught up! What terrific chapters!

I actually feel bad for Eileen. Although I would never do what she did, I can see that she needed Eddie (was that his name?) there even if it was for the wrong reasons. And now Carter can feel some empathy b/c he sees Preston sort of going through the same thing.

It's funny how Preston and Carter are feeling the same things but don't want to admit it to the other person.

I'm anxiously awaiting more! :)