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for Husband for the Holidays

by projectamy

schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just wanna say that I love all of your stories! I read them all in sitting! Please keep writing and updating!
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok, it seems like you have forgotten your faithful readers/reviewers and that's very upsetting! I thought you appreciated us more than that and hope you have a very good explanation for not updating. Do you realize how lucky you are to be one of the few authors who stories get the number of reviews they do?! Anyway, I don't think you should lead readers on with promises and that come to a full stop, it's not fair.
person heike quintana
schedule December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like your Story very mutch but wy you not write new chapters please
person Andalusia25
schedule December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens next! I've been following this story from the beginning and I love it.
Please update soon!
schedule December 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The references to younger man and older man are off-putting. Pronouns and names are perfectly all right.
person lo
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I truly hope this story does not abruptly stop like the others and we get see this to the end.
person Lord of Aldernon
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, it looks like you've forgotten about your readers... yes... again. It seems like everytime we get hooked... and review all your stories.... we are left hanging.... and hanging.... I thought you promised to try and get this story finished by Christmas. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Happy writing!
person Vivian
schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing!!! Why didn't I see it earlier? >.< you got a good plot, I love how the story developed so far ^^ so sweet, cute (the boys of course) and heart warming hehe, definitely a Xmas story ^^
Do you have any ideas yet for how many chapters this story gonna have? With how the story progressed so far, like how Carter haven't realized his feeling for Preston yet, let assume this was just at the middle of the story?

There are some typos and missed word, maybe because you don't have a beta yet? (I would love to volunteer hehe) but not any major grammar mistake :) love you see you update soon *giggle* tomorrow is Christmas already hehe. It would be awesome if we readers have some CarterxPreston time for the holiday *wink*
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. I am looking forward to the next chapter
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh people never stay! I'm grinning through the whole chapter then you throw that at me and make me almost cry!? Meanie!!! (love you!!!!) I loved it, the two dummies not even realizing they are both over the top in love!! The mom was a nice addition! Love this story, I now have a new favorite Christmas story....who NEEDS It's a Wonderful Life or Miracle on 34th Street when you have this story!!! Thanks for the update! I'm a huge fan of these two!!