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December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i am absolutely enjoying this story, read all 3 chapters in one seating. i didn't expect carter to be that hands-on to the babies. i was actually thinking he's only after fucking preston that he won't show any interest on the babies at all. but him picking up little cameron and reading a book on how to raise babies did come as a surprise. i do hope this arranged marriage clicks and that carter will fall in love with preston and vice-versa. keep it coming. i love this!
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well that was certainly different than what I imagined the scenario turning out to be. But it kind of made my heart twinge with the way Carter was talking about how Preston was a notch. I hope they finally declare feelings for one another.
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow!!!
I think that this will turn out to be the story of the year for me, I just love it so much.
Keep up the excellent work and update soon. ;)
I think that this will turn out to be the story of the year for me, I just love it so much.
Keep up the excellent work and update soon. ;)
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Boss story, love it. Hope you don't mind the corrections.
"That’s not a neighbourhood conductive to raising children.”
con·duc·tive
/kənˈdəktiv/
Adjective
Having the property of conducting something (esp. heat or electricity).
Of or relating to conduction.
I think you meant:
con·du·cive
/kənˈd(y)o͞osiv/
Adjective
Making a certain situation or outcome likely or possible.
Synonyms
helpful - contributory - instrumental
Sorry, I find it helpful when people correct my posted stories. Although I wish they'd take a whip to me and tell me what a naughty, naughty author I've been, but that's another story entirely.
"That’s not a neighbourhood conductive to raising children.”
con·duc·tive
/kənˈdəktiv/
Adjective
Having the property of conducting something (esp. heat or electricity).
Of or relating to conduction.
I think you meant:
con·du·cive
/kənˈd(y)o͞osiv/
Adjective
Making a certain situation or outcome likely or possible.
Synonyms
helpful - contributory - instrumental
Sorry, I find it helpful when people correct my posted stories. Although I wish they'd take a whip to me and tell me what a naughty, naughty author I've been, but that's another story entirely.
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh please tell me there is more I am a total whore for these Hallmark style movies!
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Just found the intro yesterday and was so happy to see it was already updated today! YAY! Anyway, the characters are great so far, not too perfect not too flawed just very interesting and endearing... can't wait to read more!
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice work, I like what you have set up so far. I like the situation and the characters are all fun and interesting. I can't wait to see what you do next!
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, it seems like Preston just signed a deal with the devil. What the heck did he just get himself into? lol
Great second chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Great second chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm really enjoying this so far... Big fan of your work and I'm looking forward to more :)
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December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the story please update soon