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for Husband for the Holidays

by projectamy

person etern
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awwww, I love these baby-centric chapters. I really enjoy seeing them interact with the babies ;) and I adore that Becket was calling for Carter and Preston thought he meant the toy, lol =D

However, I am looking forward to seeing more forward movement in Preston and Carter's relationship and a return to the adult themes in the next chapter! I'm really excited to see what happens =3

person Ls.
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving it and loving the
Quick updates
person Wynja
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*lol* still loving this! I find myself staying up really late hoping for an update. So far I haven't been disappointed... ;)
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good story. You can get this done for Christmas !
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It was great! So sweet and hot, that bit in the office??!!! OMG terrific! Love it! Keep it coming, you need motivation I will write five reviews a day!!! lol Thanks for the awesome story!
person Sayure
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hate the end of each chapter, I don't want them to end and as much I want to read about some developments in Carter and Person's relationship I don't want you to forget the babies, they are the colors of this story.
person RJaneyP
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This Xmas story manages to be extraordenarily cute and sexy at the same. With cute glorious twins almost being a clever delightful marital aid in bring the handsome big boy hardcore bachelors together perminently and not just temporary. Great story, it's so good, you should publish it as a short story. G a Fan!
person Cham
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww, too cute. Oh let their feeling grown and show! I am just afraid everyone is going to be getting hurt :(. Thank you and I hope you continue soon,
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, motivation?!, just take a look at the hits/reviews/ratings and that should motivate you enough to finish this story by Christmas! Then, take a look at out stories listed and you will know how lucky you are compared to them! So, on to the story. I loved the scene between Carter and Preston at the Forum. I can't get enough of the babies and they lighten up my day. Oooh, Carter was jealous of Stephen, he's really gotten struck by cupid (even though it's not Feb or Valentine's day) and doesn't realize it yet, haha. I am looking forward to the steamy stuff so get working on it for us in time for Christmas. I am still expecting a chater a day possibly maybe 2 a day would be nice as well.
person clo
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i don't mind the fluffy, baby-centric chapters at all. the boys are absolutely adorable. and i love jealous and possessive carter here. i wonder how he'll react if someone does show an interest on preston. i can hear him screaming bloody murder. and preston... i think he's starting to act like a 'mommy' and a 'wife' already and he doesn't even realize it. can't wait for the next chapter.