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for Husband for the Holidays

by projectamy

person lunamist
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm glad Carter has come to the realization that he needs/wants Preston to stay. He needs to get on that project pronto! Thanks so much for continuing to update this story. I love logging on and seeing a new chapter.

Hope you have a very happy holiday,
lunamist
person Cham
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow the mother showing up? I would never have thought that. I enjoyed this chapter. Preston and Carter are coming more in tune with their feeling for one another. Now someone just needs to tell the other lol. I liked it a lot thank you
person Poohkie87
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If Carter doesnt express his expression of undying love to Preston i will have a fit.. lol
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome terrific wonderful amazing! Hot chapter! Carter is hooked lined and sinkered!!! Thanks for the fast update and for the great chapter once again!! ((((HUGSSS))))
person Cham
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww, they got together. So sweet. I hope those two come to realize their mutual feelings. thank you so much for this.

person dazedandconfused
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, they finally did it! Yeah! I loved this and it was worth waiting for. I just hope that Preston doesn't find out about him being another notch on Carter's bedpost because that would kill him. I don't think that Car, so cute, realizes he's been hooked by Preston. I hope you update today too! Pretty please!
person Sayure
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was sweet in some parts, fun in others and really hot near the end. Overall, amazing. I'm so impatient to read the next one. I'm beginning to see some parts of Carter that are attractive, but his jealousy is it because he's plain possessive or is it because he had begin to feel in love? What Preston's reaction will be when he'll learn that Carter only helped him in the first place to get in his pant.

PS: if you have the possibility of correcting mistakes, here some that maybe got people confused:
“A table would be good. I have drinks to take care of, so no dancing right now.” Carter grabbed the two drinks off the counter. It was Preston who said that not Carter.
Obvious to Carter's dilemma, Preston arched. I think you meant Oblivious.
person kc
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. It is one of the few I am tracking at the moment. I find your ability to portray the interactions between Carter and Preston, and each man with the baby boys is wonderful. I am also glad you shift the POV between Carter and Preston as it allows you to give insight to both of their insecurities. I am hoping for a “happy, family ending” but I also want many more chapters to enjoy reading. Hope you have a good time over the Holidays.
person Tay
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woooow, I hope Preston and the babies don't leave Carcar, update soon.
person miles
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So fast ! Thank you ! ^^
And some action !! Very hot ! I love it !