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for Mika's Pack

by AriieObssession

person Jessie
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am having so much fun reading this story. It's so entertaining and I feel like I know the characters personally. I am relieved you mentioned there is more to come because if you ended it with chapter 10 things would be too rushed and that's not good. They haven't even rescued Mika and Chance yet so how can it end or be resolved that quickly? I hope that Adrian doesn't do anything to rash to Lou. I am kind of worried when Luca said "You'd think I sentenced him to his death." That doesn't sound too good, poor Lou!
person Jessie
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just read your profile and am so excited about the upcoming Wolf Coven Series! By the way, who's Mystic? I will have to go back and re-read the chapters in case I missed him somewhere. Oh, and, Lou's Seduction - I hope the horny demon hounding him is Sinclair and it looks like Adrian's going to still be around. I am so excited after reading the summaries to these new side stories!



person CelticThunderFan
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're on a role girl, please keep it up. I love how fast you update. So, Luca's some sort of Royal Highness and has kids. Mika and Chance are still missing and who knows what's being done to them. Lou keeps getting deeper and deeper into messes. Sinclair is just too hot I have to fan myself. Adrian is going to throw a temper tantrum at Lou's expense. I love all the drama and am excited about the side stories that are in the works that I saw mentioned on your profile page. Excellent chapter and looking forward to the next chapter, Eclissi part 2, Katie.
person darkroses
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing I love it! I hope Mika and Chance are alright although I have to admit I like that the story is focusing on Lou right now, he has become my favorite character, I would really really really like to see you make it a threesome with Sinclair, Adrian and Lou since I like Lou with both of them and I think it would be hilarious reading about Sinclair and Adrian learning to get along and share Lou not to mention Lou's reaction to two overprotective lovers :) I also can't wait to see the confrontation between Lou and the other vampires about him being with Sinclair and his job with Luca. Are you going to pair Luca up with anyone and what about Chance? There is no way this could ever have ended in ten chapters, I can't see it ending at twenty chapters since you have enough material and creativity to write a full novel about Lou and his developing relationships and Mika and Lovel's developing relationship and Mika's integration into the pack once he's back as well as the mystery of the disappearing shifters that this could be a novel long enough to rival one of Steven King's books.I hope you don't end the story once the mystery is solved I have fallen in love with the characters and would like to see their relationships grow and develop. Maybe you could make a sequel about Chance, I would love to learn about his backstory and see him meet his mate and watch the relationship develop I imagine his mate would have his work cut out for him to overcome Chance's insecurities and fear. Actually you could make several sequels, Liam needs a mate and Luca and I'd like to read more about the other alpha's and their mates. Eh...hope I haven't overwhelmed you but I have fallen in love with these characters and don't want to have to say goodbye to them any time soon.
person iriskzk1
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so ready for Lou, Sinclair, and Adrian to meet I don't what to do!!!!!!! Hopefully it will be the next chapter. *fingers crossed* I know I should be focusing on Mika but Lou's story has me captivated! Love it!!!!
person Sarkukka
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and read it with right through. It's really exciting, romantic and captivated.
Hopefully there's more soon. And I definitely give my vote for mpreg. It's always so thrilling.
And I have to say I love Lou, he's like the epitome of vampire to me. Exactly like I've always picture them to be in my head.
Wonderful job, well done!
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh finally! Some lovin' between Sinclair and Lou! It was so yummy! They are starting to become my favorite pair! I just hope that Cylis doesn't ruin it! And I seriously can't wait for Adrian to meet Sin. It's gonna be messy if Adrian and Sin face off. Also I hope Mika and Chance will be okay! They are the cutest wolves ever. Too much harm to them would break my little fangirl heart. Oh yes and your thoughts on adding Mpreg....I would love the Mpreg. It's so cute! Anyways thanks so much for the new chapter! I adore this one so much!I t delves more into the mystery and has lemon!

P.S. Could our over protective mama Luca have a secret pair somewhere? He is too cool and pretty to be all alone!
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I definitely loved the action between Lou and Sin, but just hope that Adrian doesn't get wind of it or there is going to be big trouble. I wonder if Luca has found his own soulmate...... we shall see. I just love all the twists and turns it's like reading a book or watching a live action movie and I never know what's going to happen next. Oooh, and the mystery deepens, I love playing Sherlock Holmes but still can't figure out what you have planned next so will wait to read it and see what happens. Oh, and I am feeling much better now too just coughing a little bit.
person smint45
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh another double update!!!!! I love double updates!!! I totally adore Sinclaire and the smutt was fantastic!!! And I really like luca more and more!!!! He is just so adorable!!! I just can say that I love this story very much!!! It's way my favorite at the moment!!!! I can't wait for more!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!

P.S I would love for this story to be Mpreg^^
person EJ
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sinclair and Lou, very HOT! Now my curiosity is totally peaked, how is Sinclair going to get Lou to stay longer than 24 hours? Totally looking forward to that chase, Lou can't just give in, he's too feisty for that. Can't wait for the next installment.