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for Mika's Pack

by AriieObssession

person CelticThunderFan
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I vote for a Sin/Lou/Adrian threesome so count me in on it. I wanted to punch Sylvia that little twat nymph in the nose but Lou beat me to it. I hope that Luca is closer to finding out where Mika and Chance are being held because things are not looking to good for them right not especially poor Chance. I really want to slap you for doing that to the poor kid. Silver. That had to be painful and he could die........
person iriskzk1
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter but I can't wait till next chapter because Lou, Sin, And Adrian will finally be in the same room together and Adrian is going to flip when he see's Lou. Also the surprise on your Bio made my day and I can't wait.
person iriskzk1
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah......AND HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO CHANCE?!?!?!.......my poor baby!
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed before now. Bad, I know.

I just want to say that I'm loving this whole story and I can't wait to see where it goes and how it ends.

I looked at your bio and squealed. I've fallen in love with Lou and Sinclair. I'm really excited to read their story.

You're an amazing writer.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and it just keeps getting better with each chapter you write. I really love Lou, he grows on you, and I think he's very funny too with his smart alec mouth.
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Luca has kids?! I hope they are pretty like he is! And poor poor Lou, sold up the river by his loving boss. That was too hilarious. xD
person smint45
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh so Luca is a highness^^ very interresting^^Is he some kind of royality? I wonder^^ I so can't wait fore more of this fantastic fic!!!! And I really hope the next chappy wont't be the last!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First, I have to get this off my chest, ok? (Chapter 10 was originally the last chapter O.o however at this point it looks like it's going to be more than that.) How could you even think to stop it just like that?! We haven't even found out what's going on with Mika and Chance! There is still so much story to tell, Mika's Pack is like, EPIC, and could go on forever and I would never get sick of it. Why, you could even (only once Mika's Pack is finally ended) write side stories to it featuring our favorite guys. Ok, poor little Lou, he's like a damsel in distress, LOL. I really love everyone but he's definitely my favorite vamp and him and Sinclair are a riot together. I hope Adrian doesn't get staked but am worried when he comes face to face with Sin. I really can't understand why you don't have even more reviews than you do, I don't think people are giving it a chance or know what they are missing. Don't you dare end it anytime soon, PLEASE! Ooooh, Luca has children, that's cool.
person TRUgrit
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love th revelation about Luca! Looks like Lou is about to have some fun with his dance partner XD Happy to hear about extending the story a bit. I hate it when a writer tries to tie everything up in one go because then the story just ends up being sloppy and they totally stiff us on the good stuff (no pun intended). Thank you for knowing better!
person addiena saffir
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't like what is going on with Lou...Is he supposed to be with Adrian or Sinclair? He seems to be to pat in his obliviousness when it comes to his dealings with Adrian and the whole situation with Sinclair is odd..How does Cylis know Luca but his 'charge doesn't' and it seems that your setting up Lou to be Sinclairs mate but Adrian seems to have prior claim ( I kind of prefer Adrian ) oh well we will see where else you take this.