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Loved it! I knew Dorian Gray sounded familiar! And I know where it came from! hehe -does happy dance-

no I won't kill you yet XD i still have use for you mwahahahaha. j/k
anyhow.... can't wait for the next chapther
hurry... pretty pleace?

Remus! It was Remus all along who has been kidnapping the shifters and is that Marcus in the cell that spoke to Mika? What the heck is going on? Why? Ooooh, I want to inflict some serious harm on Remus right now so have to step back and cool off. I didn't think I could love another vamp the same way I do Lou but the pun talking Raven is closing in on him and fast. So, we finally meet Luca's coven, and I love them all. You got me with the Dorian Gray Memorial and they way you introduced Franklin was epic. So, I know you are not feeling too good right now but hope you post the next chapter soon because I need to know how Mika and Chance are rescued. ~~~~ Katie ~~~~~

Honestly this is probably the funniest thing I've read on this site, and I mean that in a good way. I realize it's darker humor but you're characters are great, could probably use a little more fleshing out but you're doing pretty well. Lou and Sinclair are by far my favorite couple in this though, the poor vampire is pretty much out of luck with that one.

Keep up the good work and i'm looking forward to the updates.

Grim

Oh my gosh you are so killing me softly with these cliffhangers and only the fact that you are sick is keeping me from coming after you.... Muhahahah..... Boo!

You are my Sunshine, my only Sunshine, you make me happy when skies are blue....... hahaha..... I feel bad for him with a name like that he must have been teased alot. Oh, and Raven is cute too and I loved how you introduced him to Liam and Lou even though he probably won't remember being sit on by him since he was wasted by Eclipse.

Where is my Mika and Chance?

Luca and the whole Dorian Gray scene was really great idea. I like his friend Franklin.

Get well soon!

Ack, your killing me with these suprise updates! Oh, just to let you know I don't think anyone but registered users can vote in your forum poll. I think some readers have been leaving their votes when they write a review. So, it wasn't Marcus BUT Remus!!!! I never saw that one coming. Alright, you really know how to twist the screws, don't ya? I love Raven he kind of reminds me a little bit of Lou with his mouth, LOL. Alright, there was so much happening but I am just too tired to give too much of a detailed review this time so will say instead "Good night" and I hope you are feeling better soon.

Okay, maybe Adrian and Sinclair will not focus on Lou since they don't even realize he's gone. Sinclair has been around Lou too much, he's picking up Lou's smartass remarks. Luca saved Lou's neck just to put it in the noose again. Lou is a trouble magnet. Mystic seems really cool. Can't wait to find out more about him. Luca now has a coven, wow. They really need to get to Mika and Chance! Looking forward to more. thanks

This chapter was awesome! I loved the fight scene between Sinclair and Adrian especially the tug-a-lou that ended with a Lou sandwich, hehe. I felt so bad for Alistair, that whole scene was so sad but I'm glad the remainder of the coven will have Luca to take care of them now and Mystics introduction was perfect. I'm glad he's going to be getting his own story; and I am thrilled that the threesome is winning the vote so far! The haunted house was a nice touch and I actually laughed out loud when Lou's foot went through the stair, actually I find myself lol-ing a lot when it comes to Lou and his antics. I can't wait to see the reunion between Lovel and Mika and Chance and everyone at the clubs reaction when Lou gets back. Please update soon!

Noooo i wanna read more!!! pleace release the next one soon.

Oh my gosh, my poor little Lou is always finding himself in all sorts of trouble and now just wait until Sin and Adrian find out he drank Eclipse. I think he's in for a double spank fest. Sin and Adrian each trying to pull Lou's arms off in a tug of war fight that was so funny (sorry Lou). Lou drinking Sin's blood and getting hard, LOL. I hope Luca finds Mika and Chance soon but if they have been moved from the dungeons that isn't good news. The story about Alistair and what Tristan was doing to him and to his coven that was horrible but at least Luca took care of Tristan and I hope he endlessly suffers in whatever realm Luca sent him. So, we are finally introduced to Mystic and the Rowling Coven. Update again soon! ~~ Katie ~~