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for Mika's Pack

by AriieObssession

person dazedandconfused
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you fooled me by updating sooner than you mentioned, you naughty and evil author you, LOL. Ooooh, I am find with Adrian being with Cylis and guess it's for the best. I hope Chance and Leon will be alright. I bet that Chance will meet Lafayette at Dorian Grey Memorial. I loved all the action and the new discoveries especially Luca in fighter protector mode. You go, Luca!!!! I did miss Lou and can't wait until he meets up with Sin and Adrian again. Thanks for the super fast update, you rock!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I am just so excited right now after reading your prole again that I can't even leave a proper review for chaper 13. I loved it! It was great! I am happy that Mika and Chance were finally rescued, etc. etc. etc.

6.Seducing Lou and Capturing Adrian (Sin/Lou) (Cy/Adri) - I am seriously screaming right now I am so excited. I think the Cy/Adri pairing is a very good idea and just by readin the summary it's gonna be good. I bet it's that little evil wood nymph killing off Sin's former lovers and he's after our Lou now! Is Sin stupid? He's gotta know who it is. I am routing for a rematch between Lou and the ugly little gnome.

Oh, and Marcus is going to have his own story. I am so happy for him after what Remus pulled. I bet his future love interest is Franklin.

You are the greatest, Katie
person EJ
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I'm happy Mika has finally been found, although all these side characters are really interesting. I hope chase finds happiness (maybe with Marcus?), he seems like de deserves it the most, poor guy.
person Thirdly
schedule January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Stayed up all night reading this one. The first chapter was a bit confusing...it felt a little off because I had no idea what was going on yet. But, the chapters that followed revealed everything at a great pace! I absolutely adore all the characters in this story. My absolute favorites are Louis and Luca and their relationship (professional relationship and friendship relationship). My heart aches for Adrian and I'm one of the readers rooting a LOT for him to end up with Cy. That white-haired incubus sounds like he could be the ONLY one to help Adrian move past his 'brother complex'. Chance and Luca sound so lonely, because of their respective pasts. I hope they find significant others as well some day. I can't wait to see how this story turns out...and, especially, for Mika to return to his (new) family once again. And I'm excited to see that you're turning it into a series and are expanding it with other characters' stories.
person Angel
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! They're finally getting rescued!!! And I can't wait to see how Sinclair and Adrian react to Lou being in the hospital. Please keep up the good work and update soon. :D
person Sarkukka
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah, voting! Yes, mine goes to Sin/Ad/Lou.
This week's chapter was great. I loved the new addition, Dr. Stein. He's real blast. The other who got me snort was the vampire Sunshine. Oh, poor thing! Mothers can be so cruel.
Thank you for the update! It was as wonderful as always. I'm so hooked. Luckily, there seems to be quite a lot of new stories to expect in the near future. Lucky!!
And get well soon!
person smint45
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my that was absoloutly amazing!!!! I totally adore Lucas new coven they are all so cute!!!! Hell I didn't expect Remus to be the one behind all that!!!! I so hope that Mika and chance will be ok!!!! I hope you are felling better again soon!!! See you!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good morning, I am kind of in a rush (gotta get to work) just popping in while I am drinking my morning coffee to mention that I really enjoyed the whole scene at Dorian Gray Memorial and got a kick out of Doc. Franklin. He's so cute and it was hilarious when he thought Luca was pregnant and would make a great mommy, LOL. I can just see Luca's face. Ok, gotta run now, have a nice day.
person Jessie
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love everyone in Luca's new coven but my two favorites are Raven (you've got to get him with someone) and Sunshine, and of course the young ones are simply adorable. I was getting all hyped up to find out what's going on with Mika and Chance but to find out it was Remus and not Marcus involved in this hole mess made me want to scream. I forgot to mention that I love how Luca always manages to abduct Lou sometimes right at an inopportune time. I would love to see how Sin would react to that happening right in the middle of them having sex, LOL. I am in love too with Franklin and the idea of the whole hospital catering to the supernatural is freaking awesome. Ok, you know I want Sin/Lou/Adrian but if you just decide Sin/Lou that's fine too as long as Adrian ends up with some one. Oh, I hope you start feeling better soon so sorry to hear that you are sick.
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh you clever son of a gun! Remus was the traitor the whole time?! Love it! And very clever use of the name Dorian Gray. So I'm guessing Marcus is the one trapped with Mika and Chance? Oh and I love the new characters. Luca's new coven sounds adorable and fun. I hope we see more of Raven and.....Sunshine..*...Snort*...*Giggle* I swear every time I think of the name sunshine for a vampire I just start to laugh like crazy. Anyways thanks for the new chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

By the way I just found the poll and I'm a bit confused by it. I voted and so far it showed 4 votes for Sin/Lou(yippe!!!),4 votes for Cylis/Adrian, and 0 votes for the other two categories. But you said that the threesome is in the lead. I can't tell who's winning. >_<