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for Mika's Pack

by AriieObssession

person Jessie
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am kind of sad the next chapter is the epilogue but the good side of it is you are continuing this series and I am really excited to read the next book. Oh, I know I am going to love Mika and Lovel's smut scene and bet their 'pups' are going to be so adorable can't wait!
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Can't believe Luca now has a wolf pack to take care of too! I just thought he would be mating an alpha wolf. Wooow Luca is gonna have to deal with some real drama. He's gonna have to make his new vampire coven and wolf pack live together in harmony? Drama bomb! Totally did not see that coming! Also that new wolf named Valentine...with a name like that...you wouldn't happened to be thinking of pairing him up with Luca's introduced son, Love now would you? (Please keep in mind that I am a crazy fangirl and I just love pairing people.) I just couldn't help but notice that with names like Love and Valentine, these people were meant for each other!

Anyways thank you so much for this chapter! I can't wait for the next and final one! Lovel and Mika finally mating!!!! Hee Hee! ...And making babies?! I totally forgot that this fic now had mpreg! What a bonus!
person smint45
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god Luca is a prince!!!! And he has a pack and a coven thats so crazy but absoloutly great!!! I wonder why he went missing 500 years ago but I bet we will see what happend in his story!!!! I love that you do a story revolving Luca cause I absoloutly adore him!!!! That was an amazing chappy!!!! Thanks a lot for sharing this with us and I so can't wait for the pups^^ See you again soon!!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awe, cool, Luca is a prince how great is that?! He's very humble too about it. Now, he has his own coven and the troubles that will come along with it. I am doing happy dances in anticipation of Mika and Lovel finally making puppy love then having a family. Update epiologue soon.
person TabFan
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, but found it hard to read. I just read on your profile that you're dyslexic, which explains a lot of the mistakes. I'd gladly be a beta for you, if you're willing. My e-mail is tabjancar@gmail.com.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how you manage to do it but I either laugh my head off or now cry my heart out. I wanted to huggle Chance when Mika removed the silver. Thank goodness Marcus was with them so he could tell Mika how to do it. I loved this chapter and the action between Luca and Remus was amazing. I did miss Lou and but know that Sin and Adrian are going to the Dorian Gray to see him. I am so super happy about your upcoming new stories in this series.
person Jessie
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter and so relieved that Mika and Chance are safe in the arms of their loved ones. I enjoyed it very much. I can't wait until they all meet up at the hospital again.
person darkroses
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Marcus, he is going to be devastated I'm not looking forward to that very sad part of the story. I am glad that Mika and Chance have been rescued but you had better fix Chance or else!! You cannot leave him paralyzed. Even though I really wanted the threesome I am looking forward to seeing Cylis and Adrian together and it will still be fun to see Sinclair and Adrian trying to get along for Lou's sake(just in a different way)or maybe they won't even try, poor Lou condemned to trying to keep the two of them from killing each other for all eternity hehe. And we finally got to meet Leon I can't wait to read more about him and Raven I'm glad they are also getting their own stories especially Raven I absolutely love him he seems like a trouble magnet like Lou I can't wait to see what grief he gives his mate.
person smint45
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So the mysterious guy in the cell with them was marcus... never would have guessed^^ I'm so happy they finally found them^^ Hope Leon and Chance will be ok!!!! Thank you so much for the fast update and hope to hear from you again soon!!!
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
...OMG! That chapter was friggen AMAZING! My poor little Chance! I was crying for him when Mika was digging the bullet out and I really did cry when Chance said he couldn't feel his legs. Remus you sick bastard! How could he do that to Chance and Marcus' whole pack?! Hell! How could he do that to his own pack?! The fight scene between him and Luca was so friggen cool! Luca was so badass after he won.

But most of all, I love how you didn't reveal the number one villain! Usually in fics the ultra villain shows up in the last minute and it takes no time at all to find him and even less time to beat him. I love how your setting it up so that in each story we will get closer and closer to finding out who the epic villain is, while at the same time, we get to sit back and enjoy all the yummy romance and drama! I love it! Your story weaving skills are amazing! Thanks so much for this chapter! I can't wait for the next one!