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for Mika's Pack

by AriieObssession

person smint45
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh I just loved the way Lovel fainted in the end^^ that was so funny!!!! And I really liked the mating!!!! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us!!!! I'm of to read Luca's wolf coven^^ See you again!!!
person Moon Whistler
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Giggling madly, fancy the big strong alpha fainting lol, he probably would never hear the end of it for sure! LOL Love your story, so I'm going to read it all over again!
person Jessie
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord, this chapter was hilarious, I loved everyting that happened in it. The most memorable moment for me was at the end when Lovel, the brave and strong Alpha, fainting upon hearing the news that Mika's pregnant. Absolutely priceless. Wait until he has to change his first baby diaper, LOL.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I totally adored this story and the introduction of all the wonderful characters that I have learned to both love and hate. It made me laugh, cry and even get angry sometimes but most of all reading the final chapter left a smile on my face. I think you ended it perfectly and with a set-up of what's to come. xoxoxoxo
person darkroses
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay Chance is awake! His reaction to the stuffed toy was so sweet and the Mika and Lovel scenes were great. I am so glad that Mika was immediately happy to find out that he was pregnant otherwise I would have reached through my computer screen and ripped Bride apart, I hope she won't be able to do that again without the persons permission. She is changing the man's body against their will which is bad enough but she is also basically forcing them to become pregnant since they wouldn't know to use contraception. Mika's unique personality made his positive reaction to finding out he is pregnant believable but I don't see any of the other character's, not even Chance, reacting well to being violated in such a way. Now one or more of the guys liking the idea of being able to have kids and asking Bride for the serum would be great. I hope I didn't offend you but that just touched a nerve for some reason. I am off to read chapter 1 of Luca's wolf coven.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was a relief to see that Chance has recovered so well after being shot with silver. I have a feeling I know who might have left the stuffed wolf with him and looking forward to their story being told. Where did Dr. Bride Stein (love the name) come from the Psych ward?, LOL. She's pretty dangerous with those needles and hope she doesn't stab anyone else without their permission or there might be a lawsuit issued. Awe, poor Lovel, he didn't take the news too well of being a daddy. Very well done! I am off to read Luca's Wolf Coven. ~~ Katie ~~
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Anxiously awaiting epilogue chapter and Lovel being a daddy and Mika being the mommy. I can't wait to meet the little darlings, LOL, and hope that Mika's food cravings don't get too bad for Lovel's sake. Does, this mean that Luca will be like a Grandfather?
person Thirdly
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First of all, thanks for the reply to my review! Now, I didn't get a chance to review the last chapter when all hell broke lose...and now I'm just in shock at this chapter with the cat being out of the bag! Why is it that I always end up reading this past midnight? Bah, who needs sleep. Luca's the prince of shadows, master of a coven, and head honcho- dapprima alpha of the wolves. Gosh, buddy, you're gonna have to hire some wolves and vamps as secretaries doubling as bodyguards because that's like taking three extravagant meals during one serving! I suggest you dress them up in frilly maid costumes for the touch of humor that your busy life so desperately will need. Hang in there, Luca. And DOGGONE it (pun not intended) when Chance is too unconscious to take a whiff at Lafayette. Since that's totally HIS Lafayette now. Though we don't want it to end, everything does seem to be wrapped up for this particular storyline. The wolves have been rescued (though not all could be salvaged). Mika was found and is in one piece along with Chance, who is relatively in one piece. Yep, other than the epilogue, I'm rearing to go for the next story arch! My mind was just blown away, I'm too psyched to be sad that this story will end because I'm already dying to read the next one!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright, first of all I saw this new listing under your profile and am so looking forward to reading it; 11. Mika's Pups - Now, Luca is a Royal Highness, Prince of Vampires, OMG, I am freaking out, this is so awesome. I should have known but at least he's not conceited about it and now he has the mark of the wolves too, ooh lala. He's going to be very busy trying to keep all of them in order, will need some help I am sure but maybe not. I want Marcus to be happy too..... I am anxiously waiting for final chapter but more so to read the sequels. ~~ Katie ~~ P.S. I loved Lou's reunion with Sin and Adrian at the hospital.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I can't believe Mika's Pack is coming to end, well sort of anyway. I bet that Lovel and Mika's babies are going to be so cute and spoiled too. Luca, a prince, and now responisble for both a coven and pack, oh my goodness. I just love my Lou and looking foward to reading his own story. I am so happy you are writing stories for everyone so we have some closure.