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for Mika's Pack

by AriieObssession

person dazedandconfused
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! You very, very, very naughty and cruel author (but one of my very top favorites) of mine, LOL! You know I am just kidding - about being naughty (maybe not) and cruel (hell yeah). Anyway, I just popped in to have breakfast - read the new chapter - By the way, you nearly gave me a heart attack (I've been out shoveling - so that on top of reading this newest chapter) and now have to get my arse back out again to shovel some more snow! I will leave another longer and more detailed review later in the day once I am done with all the snow and dry off. Huggles! This chapter was really very nice and long but that was one heck of a very awful cliffhanger! How could you? I will review again later today! Promise!!!!!
person Stacy
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! This story is soooo good and to stop it where you did is just mean!!! I need more now!!! I can't take it!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I am still alive, hahha, still here and didn't have a heart attack after all lucky you. Plus, pretty lucky I didn't have one after shoveling all that wet heavy snow but close to it after reading this newest chapter. I am going to drive you nuts since the chapter was super duper long - which I loved and am breaking up my reviews for it. So, here's the first one...... You know I love all your characters, right? Well, I don't know what it is about Lou but he's kind of grown on me. I think it's cause I have a fondness for adorable vampires especially when they get themselves into trouble. So, Luca knew Lou's sire, interesting. Will we find out more about his sire in upcoming chapters... is he still alive... will we meet him? I like Lafayette (love the name too) he's very mysterious. I am not sure yet about Adrian (Lou's big brother). What's with his eyes turning blood red.....that sounds kind of... gulp.... I don't know..... scarey!!!! I think he's up to something and it can't be good just hope Lou doesn't get into too much doggy poop over it. Ooooh, I really like Sinclair... sighs.... he's so..... sexy.... hmmmm.... hot.... I don't think Lou will be able to resist his charms much longer, LOL. They would make a cute pair, don't you think so too? Oh, I loved this line.... They call me Mr. Smith........ Ok, that ends this review on to next one.....
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, we are having company soon... look like it's going to be a very long visit and a longer night....., so this has to be shorter than expected. I wanted to join the water balloon fight... so much fun..... I think Chance and Mika make an evil pair, LOL. I loved the whole pack initation/welcoming party. I love Travis' nickname for Mika, Lil'bit, awe. I think my favorite part was the scene at Tuesday's. Oh and I wonder if Lovel knows why Chance and Mika don't want Liam to drive. I really loved when Liam said to Lovel, "Yeah, yeah, screw yo...oh fuck me!" Where do you come up with these lines?!! I love them - they are hilarious! I think I will start to write them all down in a little notebook for myself. Oh my gawd, Chance has to be alright!!! Who the heck grabbed Mika?!!! That was so evil of you leaving it like that.......

I hope Luca can find Mika before anything bad happens to him!

I don't hate you.... too much.... I am sure I will forgive you once you update after New Year's.

HAPPY 2013!!!!!
schedule December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really loved this chapter. Not too sure about the ending. It was curious. I'm thinking Lucas's a demon and very old. Nothing else makes sense. Mika's a sweetheart with a bit of mystery too!. Love the two of them together, so affectionate and perfect for each other. Now when do we find out who's kidnapping shifter's?
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas!!! Oh, just to let you know, I consider this chapter an extra special Christmas present for myself and want to thank you my fav author, aka Santa, LOL. Luca is really confusing me and I can't wait for chapter 6 to finally find out the mystery. I didn't like the way Alpha Marcus was staring at Mika that kind of creeped me out. I got a kick out of how Liam drives and how cute Chance and Mika acted during the car drive. Anyway, why was Luca hiding in the 'shadows' at their apartment and why didn't he show himself to Mika? Why didn't Mika know/sense he was there? I wonder if Lou will find out any news about what's been happening with the abductions. I simply adore Lovel and Mika as mates.... sighs.... will this story be Mpreg ... I would love to see them having 'pups'.
person smint45
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was fantastic!!!! Thanks for the christmas update!!! I really likes this chappy and the little early morning fluff^^ Thanks so much for the fast update and belated merry christmas and a happy new year!!!! See you again soon!!!!!
person addiena saffir
schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused about how Liam is Lovel's brother because he was not pictured in the family photos. Is he a half-sibling?
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, no worries, you are forgiven for being a tiny bit late updating because this chapter made up for it.
I felt bad for Chance learning about his past but am glad he has a new friend in Mika. Oh, and it was horrible how Mika lost his parents but thank goodness Luca was there to save him. Luca knew Mika's parents, am I right? Were they good friends? Who was that black wolf who killed them and was there more than one. If so, did Luca kill all of them that night? Ooh, cliffy, you naughty author. So, is Luca perhaps a Vampire too? I just love mysteries and try to unravel them even if I am wrong, LOL. Thanks for updating!

person smint45
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow again an amazing chappy!!! I really like the twins they are crazy but cute^^The backgroundstorys of both chance and Mika were so sad... I love Lucas eyes purple is a great color and they seem to change in certain occations^^I really want to know more about this mysterious man^^ I kind of picture him with long silver hair but I'm eagerly waiting till you finally discribe him^^ Hope to hear from you soon!!!!