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excellent! Thanks for the fast update!

I would have left a signed-in review but forgot my password and thought I would be quicker this way. I am so hooked on this deliciously decadent story of yours. Cloe is evil and some what of a sadist but I am curious as to how he turned out this way. I wonder if he was sexually abused as a child and thus Bee bee the bondage bear was born to help him with his demons. I am bookmarking this story so I can follow it and any other stories you write. You are an amazing writer with a very vivid imagination. ~~~ Katie ~~~

I am very much enjoying the heartlessness and humour of your story so far! Cloe is a unashamedly evil character, but on the other hand he is also very entertaining. Poor Jules, I did feel sorry for him though, you fleshed him out so well. I look forward to reading more about Cloe and the bondage bear!

Oh my gosh! I just checked in one last time before going to bed and am I glad I did. I don't know but for some strange reason I get really excited everytime I see this story updated. I have a strange fixation with Bee bee and definitely want a bondage bear for myself now, LOL. I cringed when he almost got run over by a taxi. Wow, that was a close call but luckily Cloe was there to save him. So, I was right and the police are involved with the Slavers Den, awesome. I love it when I guess things right about a story. So, now I am wondering if Edgar will be in serious trouble for sending Cloe to this nightclub and all the trouble he and Bee bee got into. I don't know but I wouldn't want to be standing in Edgar's shoes when Cloe gets back to the hotel, LOL. Oh, oh, I think Will is in serious trouble. I think the next chapter is going to be really interesting especially since Cloe and Bee bee are heading back to the Slavers Den.... I really am looking forward to that part of story and finding out more about it. "Goodnight"

Love the story so far! Cloe is a great nut job character! The bear is over the top cool btw, I also want one, I would even take it with me grocery shopping! I'm hooked! Thanks for the story!

Oh my gosh! I really am having fun reading this very entertaining but delightfully naughty story. I think I am just as fascinated now by Bee bee as Cloe is, LOL, and can't wait to find out more about their 'history' together and how they first became 'acquainted'. Oooh, we are finding out more about Cloe as the story unfolds, and I find myself wondering just how many more people are involved in this 'slave' ring he is part of. I just hope Cloe doesn't get caught or find himself in trouble (he takes some chances of being seen) but am thinking the police could also be involved in everything too. So, the hotel Cloe and Bee bee are staying at along with Edgar are part of this whole kidnapping scheme, that's an interesting twist. I like Sareph already and how he interacted over the phone with Cloe and can't wait to see more of him. I think he likes Cloe so wonder what's up with that. Oh, and Seth (the boss?) sounds like a very interersting sort of guy so looking forward to be introduced to him too. Thanks for the fast update and see you at next one!

Oh, me again! I didn't realize Alexander is Cloe's own personal 'slave' and thought he was just training him but Sareph mentioned something about him not being responsible if Cloe kills another one of his own slaves. I am sure you will explain all so I will be patient. I do think Cloe has his own dark past (with abuse) and that's why he's the way he is now. I actually feel kind of sorry for Cloe......

I can't say I feel sorry for Cloe like Dazed (love you dazed!) but I LOVE him! He's an excellent villain! I do believe you could market BeeBees at this point because I think we'd all buy one! lol! Great story, thank you sooo much for the fast updates and more pleeeeaase!

Hey, I love this story of yours. I am a little bit confused though because I thought at first it was supposed to be about Cloe and Alexander, and Alexander is the name of story, so was wondering or thinking that you may have changed your mind about it which resulted in a new story description from the original one you put up when you posted chapter 1. Anyway, I love kidnap/bondage stories as long as they contain no death. I find I am totally entranced by Bee bee and he is really creepy, LOL. I am assuming he has already sold Alexander and is taking Tristan to his new master.

Hi DemonTamer and thanks for the reply! You will find I am a review stalker once I find a story that I am hooked on so you will be getting feedback from me alot, LOL. I thought I would mention since you are a newbie to AFF that you might want to check out the link called Info & Support and then click and read the T.O.S. link listed under it because it explains all. I also think you're disclaimer is wrong and a site moderator might leave you a review about it with instructions how to correct it. I copy and pasted this one for you which I think is right. Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited. Oh, and you might want to check out the link called Forums too it's really useful. I think in order for you to reply to any reviews on a particular story you write that you might have to sign-up for a story review reply discussion in the forum and then you can put a link to it in your story but you can ask a moderator in the forum and they can help you figure out how to do it correctly. Catch you at next update!