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Ok, well know we know why Cloe acts the way he does plus learned more about his background (except how and when and where, etc he was first taken and trained by Seth) and what a fantastic chapter it was! I was sort of concerned for Cloe but he fooled me and I wonder if even Seth knows he was fooled... well sort of.... I think.... maybe not. So, Seth and Sareph are brothers, cool. It was Seth who broke and turned Cloe into who he is... very interesting. I still want Edgar to pay for getting Cloe in trouble (Seraph knows) but does Seth?!! I think Edgar needs to be punished and hope that Seth allows Cloe to do it, LOL. Paybacks a b-i-t-c-h. I really like Sareph. Thanks for another amazing and entertaining chapter in the life and adventures of Cloe..... Oh, I hope Lexie will be alright and not die from drowing or anything because I like him too.

Ooops, I forgot to ask but do we find out what happens to Will when Seth trains him?!

I know some readers might not agree with me but I actually felt sort of sorry for Cloe in this chapter. Especially, after finding out more about his past history with the Slave Den and how cruel Seth is. I am glad Cloe has Sareph to look out for him but even he can't stand up to his brother as that was proved. Please tell me that this story will have a happy ending of sorts for Cloe. In a way it's not his fault for the way he's acting, the blame on that can be put on the cruel and heartless Seth plus the circumstances surrounding Cloe's own abduction. I do like Seth very much and hope that he can help Cloe. Oh, and Edgar has got to pay for his part in getting Cloe in trouble with Seth. He is a stinker. ~~~ Katie ~~~

Cloe better be a little more appreciative of Seth's brother because I think he's the only one keeping his brother from actually either killing him or selling him off and sending him somewhere else. He's really off his rocker but kind of grows on you. I think Bee bee is more scarey. He kind of reminds me of that movie about a doll called Chucky who is possessed by the spirit of a killer or something like that.

Ok, I am getting seriously upset with the review captcha thingy and this is my fourth time trying to leave a review. Grrr! I just read all the chapters over again and caught something that got my attention. In chapter one, there is a description of Bee bee as being a shabby brown teddy bear. I am thinking that Cloe may have at one time been a slave to a cruel owner himself when he was younger and Bee bee was his teddy bear whom he turned to for comfort and who was there for him in his captivity. Maybe later Seth rescued and took him in under his protection. I dont know this is just an assumption on my part that I got from re-reading story. I am also interested in the Slaver Den's board that Cloe was reading in chapter 2 and why some names were crossed or smudged out and the meaning of that.

I was just checking in one last time before heading for bed and wanted to mention that I think Edgar is tyring to get Cloe in trouble with Seth. I thought he was acting kind of weird about stuff. I hope Seth gets mad at Edgar for almost getting Cloe killed or worse at that club where he got into all that trouble and it was Edgar who sent him and Bee bee there. I am tired so will check back sometime tomorrow.

Already like Seth! I just hope Cloe is still going to be okay to be the evil little scamp he is! Bravo once again on an awesome and fast update!

Oh my gosh! What an evil cliffhanger you bad author........ I think Cloe might be in trouble and something already tells me that Seth and Cloe have a history together. So, was Cloe really not allowed to go slave hunting by himself? Is that because Seth really cares for him and doesn't want anything bad to happen to him? Will certainly payed for how he treated Cloe and Bee bee at the club. Will we find out later what happens to Tristan, Jules and Will? I love your fast updates they make my day. I can't wait to read more of this story! Thanks for updating!

I am loving this story. Cole is HILARIOUS and Bee bee is my favorite character.

I hope that Seth goes easy on Cloe and thought it was sweet that Sareph was trying to protect him from Seth's wrath that is until he showed up at the front door to greet them home. Is he like a big brother to Cloe? I am very interested to find out what is going to happen now that Cloe and Bee bee are back home. ~~~ Katie ~~~