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Oh man, am I so glad I discovered this site or I wouldn't be able to read all these awesome stories I've just recently come across. I'll be honest and say I've never read a story quite like this but I am really liking it for sure.

Oooh, I am so excited to be your first reviewer of '2013' and have missed you my delightful and wicked naughty author. Hey, what happened to Edgar? Wasn't Cloe going Edgar hunting with Bee bee? Anyway before I begin I thought you would want to know that Chapter 7; Broken Will, needs to be adjutsted/fixed. If you go back and look at it the lines are too long as in left to right and the reader has to scroll all the way to the right to read each sentence. I think it's an easy fix. So, on the the review, oh my poor sweet innocent (well not anymore) little Tristan what a sleeze bag that Wilks is! Cloe was trying to be kind of nice to Trissy so he shouldn't have pissed him off but I hope whatever he is planning to do with him next doesn't get Cloe into too much trouble with Seth again. I hope you were not attacked by too many holiday shoppers during Christmas especially with any returns. They can be pretty violent, LOL. I am glad you updated!

This is really weird I mean when I was a bit younger I had a dream something like this is was strange and terrifying but intriguing as well. It mainly involved kids though aged from like 11 to like early to mid twenties mostly teens though. The main ones in the dream was beautiful blond boy around 15 years old maybe 16 with hazel eyes and just the most beautiful smile ever anyway enough of that it was only a dream I had over and over for a long time. Your story was interesting a bit scary but interesting.

I don't know why I keep coming back. Cloe is out of his damned mind... and Seraph too, for loving Cloe. Seth is... well Seth is Master I guess. Edgar is an idiot. Bee Bee... he doesn't friggin exist goddammit! You know what, I don't believe I like a single character but fuck if I won't read the next chapter. And with relish. So bully for you, friend.

You do NOT disappoint! Great update! YAY Cloe you go get Edgar! Felt sooo bad for Will! WOW those two are mean as hell! I felt every bit, well not every bit or I wouldn't be writing this! LOL Great writing. Sooo worried for poor Tristan! Can't wait for the update and I feel for you I've done the retail gig around this time of year! ***Sending you LOTS of patience for pain in the ass customers*** Now I know why you write, need to get out the frustration!! lol Much thanks!

Oh, no, retail!!!! I've been there and done that so can really sympathize with you. No worries! I love this story so much and will wait for updates until you have more free time and are not as stressed from holiday shoppers. I feel bad for Sareph and wish that Cloe could see how much he cares for him and not the way his brother does but different. I do think Seth would kill Cloe because he's that cruel and enjoy it. Oh, poor Will, I hope he's not permenatly (sp?) damaged from the burns on his feet and will be able to walk again. I feel bad for Lexie too and hope Cloe doesn't kill him. Anway, I think Edgar is in serious trouble, LOL, and can't wait to see what Cloe (and Bee bee) has in store for him but he deserves whatever Cloe is going to do to him. I just hope he doesn't get in trouble with Seth again. Huggles, your crazed and dazed fan, dazedandconfused.

Awe, I felt horrible for Will and how both Seth and Cloe finally broke his spirit. Hahaha, I think Edgar is in some serious trouble and hope Cloe makes him pay... but will what Cloe does to him be the straw that breaks the camel's back with Seth?!! If so, can Sareph step in and stand up to his brother?!!! Oh my gosh, I love this story! I am sorry work is driving you crazy and hope you can find time to relax after work from all the holiday shoppers driving you nuts. ~~ Katie ~~

Oh, I am so relieved you are still writing about Cloe and apologize for putting any added stress on you. I hope Cloe makes Edgar suffer cause he deserves it. I hope someday you write a side story to this one about how Cloe turned out the way he is but only after you finish writing this one.

Is this story over or still a WIP? I am confused because you haven't updated in like two days but you didn't say 'The End' or 'Completed' or anything like that. I was enjoying it and had hoped to be able to read more about Cloe so will be disappointed if it ends like that with no resolution. I guess I was spoiled with how fast you were updating but now it seems like story is at a standstill because you haven't updated.

Whoa....hell of a chapter! Great glimpse into what made Cloe so...well Cloe! Edgar is a creep but Seraph (think I spelled that right) is a complicated guy. Seems to almost have too much heart for this. hmmm. Love Seth! I don't know, just his power over the house, wow! Great update Thanks for the awesome read this early morn!