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I have no clue how I feel about Cole. Sometimes I can't stand him and then there are times when I think he's not so bad but then he does something and I'm just like I can't stand him. The whole Seth and Sareph came out of third field for me. Comepletely shocked me but I like it. It has me wondering was going to happen when he finds out about Cole and Sareph. He's already going to have to deal with Cole's mess because the witness woke up. Good job and welcome back. I missed your story.

Holy shit! This shit is awesome and crazy! Fantastic! Full of angst, madness and unbelievable sex! I really can't wait for another. I say Edger got what's coming to him lol (oh I'm so cruel) And I love Cloe and his weird yet hilarious bear, they make a cute couple (in and best-friend kind way) Anyways really enjoy the story and I really can't wait for the next the chapter.

that was so fucked up -- and funny. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oooh, revenge is sweet, LOL. I really don't feel sorry at all for Edgar because he got what was coming to him. Cloe really is a dangerously demented individual who was created by Seth with Edgar's help. I really don't want to see him get hurt because he's been damaged enough and sometimes I get the feeling he's calling out for help. I don't know just a feeling maybe not. I do hope that someday Sareph and Cloe join forces together and break Seth. Then they can become the leaders of the slave den organization. I guess that's the dangerously demented side of me talking, LOL, just kidding. I do still feel bad for Lexie and hope that Cloe doesn't damage the kid too much like Seth did to him. See you at next update ~~ waves bye bye to Cloe and Bee bee ~~~

Really great, sooo glad Edgar got what he deserved!! He's limping?? Gee wonder why! lmao!! GREAT chapter! I really want some chocolate milk now, teehee! thanks for the update!!

This is a very interesting story and I find myself enamoured by it. I have a strange addiction towards Bee bee, is that good?

Oh my gosh! Why is your story being hidden? I saw the review the moderator left you! I am going to cry! Please fix whatever the moderator is telling you to fix and come back! Maybe check out the forum and ask a question or something. Unless, it's because they dont' want you to answer reviews or leave long author notes. I didn't think you were doing that though and were allowed so many lines to respond or something like that. Maybe, you can set up a story/review discussion topic in the forum or something like Tumblr. If that's what the problem is - I don't know but am panicking this story will go away forever and then I will be distressed. There are so many stories I was following that got removed from here for various TOS violations and the authors disappear forever and so do their stories. PLEASE DON'T LET THAT HAPPEN. If you get removed, let me know where else to go to be able to read your stories. Tumblr is good and you can post your stories/chapters there - I know - other authors do it all the time. Or, maybe you can set up a live journal account or something like that. If you don't understand what they are asking you to do, please ask them for help in the forum.

Wow I love this story!!! Cloe is such a dick! Poor Tristan! Waiting for next update!!! Thank you for posting!!

I am so happy you updated. I've missed reading about Cloe and Bee bee. I have to admit I have a kind of strange infatuation with Cloe and Bee bee, I can't help myself! This story is my addiction.

Welcome back! I am glad to see you are still continuing this story and can't wait to see what Cloe and Bee bee will do next. I wonder if Lexie is still alive and well (as well as he can be) and poor Tristan! Oh my gosh! Poor Cloe is so twisted but it's really not his fault, right? The blame can be put on Seth breaking Cloe when he was younger. See you at next chapter. ~ Katie ~