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I am really worried about Cloe and Seraph now. I hope someone can stop what Seth is doing before something even more worse happens. Update soon! ~~ Katie ~~

Oh poor cloe! And seraph!! Please update soon! I wanna know what happens!

OOoh, I think this story is reaching it's climax! Jason is closing in on them but will Seth still get away and will Jason become a slave?! Finally, we learn of Cloe's past! How sad but I thought it might be something like that. So, his real name is Taylor (nice) and it was Seraph who introduced BB to him as a child. I hope Sareph and Cloe become closer and get away from Seth. Good job! I like your new story too.

Wow, talk about the you know what hitting the fan, poor Cloe. Yes, I feel bad for him. So, this explained in more detail about Sareph's and Cloe's childhood years. Poor Sareph, getting raped by his own father and now his brother. I hope Jason can bring Seth down. I hope the courts go easy on Cloe... should it come to that. I am keeping my fingers crossed Sareph and Cloe leave town together to start a new life... with Bee bee of course... you can't forget him. I liked finding out that it was Sareph who gave him Bee bee to help him deal with his new life.

Holy crap, that Seth needs to get taken care of. I mean it really got to me when Sareph showed those video tapes to Cloe. It was really sad and it must have really shocked Cloe or rather Taylor. Thanks for updating and I am addicted to your new story now too.

Thank you for continuing the story, can't wait for the next one!

Oh my gosh, you are back, and with a vengeance. Oh geeze, poor Sareph! I really despise that Seth and what he is now doing to his kid brother. I am curious whether or not Cloe knows what kind of trouble he might be in if Seth found out about him and Sareph. I would like to see Cloe turn on Seth and get his revenge. That would be cool.

I am so glad you are alright. I was getting worried about you. Glad you are back and hope you are well. I was a little disgusted with Cloe this chapter even though I know he has problems and am usually more sympathetic with him and bee bee but not this time. He got poor Sareph in big trouble with Seth. I know it was Sareph who wanted to take Cloe out on a 'date' but what he let Cloe do to him was beyond what I ever pictured him allowing. So, it was interesting to find out they knew each other as children. Why, did Seth hurt Cloe that way if they were all friends. I would like to know how Seth turned out the way he did too.

I am wondering why Sareph couldn't have just be happy with Daniel and then he possibly might not be in this mess he now finds himself in with Seth. Cloe is clueless. Geeze, poor Will is well and truly broken now and a perfect pet for Seth. Oh, and a very interesting cliffy too. So happy to see you updated, Katie.

Oh, how I've missed you! Welcome back! I am beginning to dislike Cloe. Sareph really cares for him and is only trying to protect him from Seth. Now, Sareph is nothing but a slave and won't be able to help Cloe anymore, I don't think he will anyway. I don't like Seth at all. I still hope Cloe/Bee Bee and Sareph end up as slave/master in the end and that Cloe learns to love Sareph.