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for The Madness of Cloe

by DemonTamer

person Vic
schedule June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So good! Could you show were Seth and Sereph are at now?
person Jessie
schedule June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, I am glad you updated this particular story and was getting worried you had writer's block or it was on hiatus. Great new couple of chapters and I hope Chloe has his revenge and gets back with Sareph.
person Pansy
schedule June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! I love your story sooooo much. This is one of the best on AFF. I really like cloe. He is naughty, dangerous and cute in a way. I want this to be a long and completed one. Please update soon. This story is too good to leave unfinished. So please?
person Anon
schedule June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am very upset this story seems to have been put on hold. You seemed to have a good fan following so I hope you don't lose them. I enjoyed the frequent updates but then you just stopped, no explanation. Good luck, happy writing and I will miss this story.
person guest
schedule April 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Awesome! oh its so good. But i do kinda feel bad for Jason. With the gun O-@ that must've hurt>.< Anyways, great work.
person Jessie
schedule March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I felt for sure that Jason was going to take down Seth's house of horror's and save everyone but no he goes and gets himself in one royal mess instead and becomes a victim himself. I did miss Cloe but this was a very good chapter and Tristan was in it too.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was anxious to find out what happened to Cloe but am willing to wait. I liked this chapter about Jason. I really believed he would have stopped Seth but find it interesting how easy it was for him to be put in the position of being blackmailed instead. I do think one day he will stop them but it will take pure luck on his part because there are too many people involved in the police department. I feel so bad for Tristan and maybe you can do a one-shot about him in Russia with this mafia mob boss. Later, Katie aka CelticThunderFan.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule March 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh for crying out loud, poor Jason! I hate Edgar. I am so glad that Jason hasn't given up and still is planning on bringing Seth down.
person dazedandconfused
schedule March 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I did miss what happened to Cloe but this was a very good filler chapter. I think Jason will have his vengeance for himself and the other victims before this is over. Oh my gosh, poor Tristan being shipped off to Russia!!!
person Vic
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!