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for Paying the rent

by Laevi

person dazedandconfused
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd, oh my gawd, oh my gawd! You sure do know how to warm a girl up this very cold brisk sunny morning. Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh! That was.... just..... WOW..... I really love Shannon and Carter they are just perfection and I just hope Beau and Ned are making out just as well at they are. I am off to get my morning cup of hot chocolate with marshmellows. Oh, it looks like we are going to have a white Christmas (but I hate shoveling and my dog hates walking in the snow or slush) and if you celebrate it I wish you and Theo a very merry one and hope Santa is good to you both because you deserve it.
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't stop smiling over here! These two are wonderful! Great chapter! More please!!!
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, Carter and Shannon are the sweetest couple ever and the spicy tease of Ned and Beau leave me wanting more more more! Loved it! Thanks for the update!
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love Shannon & Carter (they are the sweetest couple) and I can't wait to see how their relationship continues to blossom. I want to find out more about the mystery behind Beau's resistence and am sure Ned will discover how to break it. Resistence is futile, LOL. (I love Star Trek & can't wait for the new movie that's coming out) I am kind of missing Jerome and Jeffrey.
person Cham
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw yay! This is going to be a multi-relationship story. I really like those from you. Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Didn't think I could like any couple better than Jeff and Jerome, but you did it, I adore Shannon and Carter! They are so sweet together! Well done chapter! Can't wait for more! Thanks for the update!
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awe, Shannon and Carter are so sweet together and I am glad Carter didn't give up on him but was persistent in his 'courtship' is that what you would call it?! Again, I love this story... well, I love all your stories so no surprise there.
schedule December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for the update! I love Jerome and Jeffery, so damn cute! Great story! Can't wait for more!
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think I see a potential matchmaker in Jeff, LOL. I don't think Beau and Shannon will know what hit them... or will it be Ned and Carter?! I can't wait to see how Jeff breaks the forbidden rule about bears and twinks. Thanks for updating! Oh, and I still hope you and Theo are feeling better. All the best to you both during this holiday season.
schedule December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say that despite not being a big fan of bears I love how this story is going and I can't wait to read more :)