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by cultofpsyche

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schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Well then. This was really good writing. An intriguing and solid story. At first I was a little confused at her indifference but then, I think it was in the principal's office, it dawned on me. Then it just seemed to natural, the way she was behaving. I liked her as a character. I hated her anatomy teacher, though. No matter how neccessary he was. And the principal -- the pig! And those boys in the bathroom! It's kind of funny, how moved I was by this story. I don't even like this kind of stuff but I was riveted so: Bravo! Now I am going to wash the images out of my mind with soap.

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