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November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that chappy was fantastic!!!! I really love this story!!!! Poor Vincent, they are so mean to him... all but our gental Jahrah^^I really like the kid!!!! I just hope that alle the prejudices will fade when Vincent proves himself!!! I want them to trust him^^ Please update soon!!!! See you!!!
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November 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it's like BBC sherlock! haha! awesome
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November 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting start!!!! Although I still have problems to get a full understandig of your world, I hope there will be more information in the following chapters. Sometimes you introduce somebody or something into the story without explaining, that makes it a bit hard to understand. Like when he sees Tsukoi lowering the newspaper in the lobby. At that point we don't know who tsuki is and that confiuses quite a bit. Anyway I really like this story a lot and I would love to read more!!! Hope to hear from you soon!!!!
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November 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was fantastic and explained a lot^^ Thank you!!! I really like Tsuki and Vincent and our blind smart dragon kid^^ I can't wait to see where this is going!!! Hope to hear from you soon!!!